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alissablue

Now and Again (19/??)

Jan 19, 2011 14:07

Title: Now and Again
Author: alissablue
Rating: PG-13/R, will be NC-17 eventually.
Characters/Pairings: Luke/Reid, Noah, other Oakdale characters and an OC here or there.
Category: Fix it-fic, AU
Summary: “If men define situations as real, they are real in their consequences.”- W.I. Thomas
Warnings: Angsty Angst, some mindfuckery
Disclaimer: Do not own. ( Read more... )

fan fiction, pairing: luke/reid (lure), !author|artist: alissablue, fic: now and again (lure)

Comments 45

vintagelamb January 20 2011, 01:55:23 UTC

Dead. That's me. I think I just had a stroke.

alissablue January 22 2011, 20:32:12 UTC

Am I a bad person for feeling a little giddy that my fic caused it XD?

Thank you (For both the comment and your icon of Craig, because I still can't look at it without cracking up)!

fangirl_bubba January 20 2011, 01:57:37 UTC

I live for the angst!

alissablue January 22 2011, 20:35:05 UTC

There are few things I love more than writing/reading angst XD.

Thank you!

marsabi January 20 2011, 02:35:52 UTC

Great! I love all that sexual tension and the way you captured them both here! Hurry through those exams so you can write more !

alissablue January 22 2011, 20:37:24 UTC

Thank you! =)

Exams are pretty much over, so hopefully I'll be able to write a lot this week^^.

greek_09 January 20 2011, 04:10:43 UTC

I loved how you interwove the dialogue from Noah's surgery into the story with both Luke and Reid.

Damn, Channing and his timing though. It was definitely heating up in those chairs. Big time.

Happy Reidiversary!

alissablue January 22 2011, 20:43:16 UTC

*SQUEE* ICON LOVE<333333 Gilmore Girls is one of my favorite shows ever.

Thank you. I love the dialogue from Almost Sex Day and I wanted to use an intense scene for this chapter. I'm glad you enjoyed it^^.

At least Channing is aware of his horrible timing XD.

Thank you and Happy Reidiversary. ;)

greek_09 January 23 2011, 03:27:35 UTC

I freaking love GG with a passion. It was my first real experience with the quick-witted, rapid-fire dialogue BRO that you just couldn't help but love.

BTW, BRO is before Reid Oliver but I think you might have figured that out. :)

alissablue January 23 2011, 12:46:12 UTC

LOL, mine too. I was obsessed with that show<3.

teranee January 20 2011, 04:35:35 UTC

Luke attempted to define what the unknown had been. A part of him hoped for the same ache he’d felt himself, the rest had high hopes for pure coincidence. Random counterproof to convince him that Reid finding him had nothing to do with him at all. There weren’t gravitational forces at play, greater and stronger than themselves or nature fixing something that had been broken. Heaven above wasn’t stitching up its’ perfection, nor was the impact a single meeting, a touch, a chance encounter and his skin within reach, had had on him anything other than a fabrication.I LOVE that. The fixing something that had been broken bit...it kinda killed me ( ... )

alissablue January 23 2011, 00:36:32 UTC

Wow, thank you so much<3. My reply isn't nearly as awesome as your comment, but I truly appreciate every word of it.

That paragraph (with the fixing something) was a last minute add-on, but now I'm so glad I put it in there^^.

And I love the "Luke's touch proved him wrong" line. It's the first line I wrote for this chapter and I think it'll be an important concept throughout the rest of the fic. Luke will only continue to prove Reid wrong.

HAPPY REIDIVERSARY, the best worldwide holiday ever.