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Now and Again (19/??)

Jan 19, 2011 14:07

Title: Now and Again
Author: alissablue
Rating: PG-13/R, will be NC-17 eventually.
Characters/Pairings: Luke/Reid, Noah, other Oakdale characters and an OC here or there.
Category: Fix it-fic, AU
Summary: “If men define situations as real, they are real in their consequences.”- W.I. Thomas
Warnings: Angsty Angst, some mindfuckery
Disclaimer: Do not own. ( Read more... )

fan fiction, pairing: luke/reid (lure), !author|artist: alissablue, fic: now and again (lure)

Comments 45

speechless16 January 21 2011, 01:04:16 UTC

This was just so intense and so perfect. You write their feelings so beautiful and I feel so sad when I come to end of the chapter.

I found myself pratically shoving my face against the computer screen thinking that I could just make their damn knees touch already and be done with it!

And yes Channing does have sucky timing but atleast he can admit how bad he sucks.

On a random side note: “You think I want Noah to die?”
Hmm... yes. Can that be arranged?

Simply put I loved this whole chapter and I cant wait til you post another!

alissablue January 24 2011, 11:50:57 UTC

Late reply is late, sorry...

I found myself pratically shoving my face against the computer screen thinking that I could just make their damn knees touch already and be done with it!
LOL, THIS.

Thank you! =)

More soon!

ganeshalemming January 25 2011, 19:25:19 UTC

Okay, now I'm starting to get what you say about payoff... All those chapters apart, all that build-up, makes for an almost unbearable intensity now that gives an incredible charge to everything between them, to the point where they can hardly look each other in the eyes and it feels like a simple touch might end the world. Wow.

alissablue January 26 2011, 00:50:21 UTC

Can I just say how much I love your description of what's happening between them? Because I do. But, yes, that's the general idea.

Thanks for reading and commenting^^.

gradgirl_07 February 21 2011, 02:15:28 UTC

Ahaha. He can’t even think of Luke. Acknowledgement is the first step, Reid. Go on, it’ll make you feel so much better.

And, yes, this is you Evil Spawn again, when all the things Reid is thinking/remembering/dreaming (not sure what to call it, anymore) is the day of Noah’s surgery. (Oh and I was wondering, are you going to kill Noah? Not sure how I feel, either way, actually.)

He wanted to get away, to run the other way and make an honest effort not to devour him in a blind surge of hunger and sheer need. Now that is something I wouldn’t mind reading. ;-)

Oh my heart. Of course, of course Luke would be hearing all of Reid’s voice on surgery day. They’re so tentative around each other, but just fighting the inevitable, but I guess it’s b/c they each know what they want, what they’ve been feeling, but it’s kind of crazy so why would the other guy?

And I absolutely love hearing Reid said lure. Gets me every time.

I kind of choked on the question myself. But they’re still them it’s hard to read a fic when they’re not them. But ( ... )

alissablue February 21 2011, 02:35:33 UTC

Killing Noah would hurt Luke too much. Especially because he still feels so much guilt over the accident. :(

Exactly. I mean, how weird would it be to meet someone and just immediately be madly in love with them and want them more than you've ever wanted anyone in your life? I can understand why Luke and/or Reid would be freaked out by that.

It's so weird to write them like this. They have a completely different foundation, yet canon is still looming around the corner.