Comments | alissabobissa: 2 LOST ficlets

alissabobissa

2 LOST ficlets

Jun 06, 2010 17:05

Apparently the end of Lost and a few conversations with people got my mind gears a turnin'. Who knew?

Prompt: Sawyer, Rachel Carlson -->> children
Words: 900
Warnings: set post-series
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Notes: For cynthia-arrow and her love of a reformed Southern con man.

( He was standing there showing off dimples that were almost indecent on a man his age. )

fanfic, lost

Comments 9

lint138 June 7 2010, 00:12:28 UTC

I love it. I love it. I love it. I love it. I love it. I love it. I love it. I love it. I love it. I love it. I love it. I love it. I love it. I love it. I love it. I love it. I love it. I love it.

You have Hurley DOWN. So the worry was unwarranted. Lissy FTW.

alissabobissa June 7 2010, 23:58:46 UTC

*grins* Thank you. Hurley was fun to play with. :)

clueless_02 June 7 2010, 05:07:07 UTC

Oh, how I love these ficlets, especially the Rachel/James one!! *wibbles at my tragic suliet ship*

You did such an awesome job on both these fics and I thoroughly enjoyed reading them!

alissabobissa June 8 2010, 00:00:59 UTC

Jesus, did I love Sawyer/Juliet! For some reason, all I could think about after the finale was James somehow meeting Juliet's sister, so this just sorta came out. So glad you like these. :D

clueless_02 June 8 2010, 00:14:47 UTC

Even though I enjoyed Sawyer/Juliet's snarky moments at the end of S3, I was morally opposed to Sawyer/Juliet when they ended up together on the beach at the conclusion of S4 because I was so afraid that she would end up being the *other woman* again; but when they kissed in "La Fleur," I was sold! I was such a wreck after "the Incident"

alissabobissa June 8 2010, 00:38:41 UTC

I was sold on the beach at the end of S4. It took less than a minute for me to start envisioning snarky little dimpled crazy-eyed blonde children running around the island giving nicknames to everything. *sigh*

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cynthia_arrow June 8 2010, 03:05:38 UTC

Aww, Sawyer going to visit Rachel and her son! I like this outsider's perspective on Sawyer, how his character shines through. I hope he does indeed go and get to know his daughter.

I love Hurley being unsure of how to be in charge, and he'd totally think to compare Jack's burial to Return of the Jedi, which was awesome. How cool would it be if Jack was one of the ghosts Hurley got to talk to! You kept this very in character for him, and totally in his voice. Nice work.

alissabobissa June 10 2010, 00:01:49 UTC

Thank you. It felt kinda weird writing for something that I associate so strongly with you (especially in terms of fic), so I'm glad you gave these a go. Hurley was so much fun to play around with. :)

And I totally see sawyer getting to know his kid after he gets home, and I'd love to read someone else's take (hopefully a longer one than this) on the Hurley/Ben dynamic in protecting the island. :)