One night stand (4/6)

[alittlebrighter]

Fic: One night stand
Chapter title: see me, feel me, touch me, heal me
Rating: R for swearing and boy-kissing
Pairing: Merlin/Arthur
Word Count: 1055
Summary: A one night stand changes Arthur forever
Disclaimer: Merlin belongs exclusively to the beeb and shine (you can tell cos if they belonged to me every episode would be PWP) ;-)

Notes: More than half

Comments

[ravilievna]

Can I tell you how much I love this story, I've been waiting for an update all week, and it just makes me go all mushy and warm fuzzy inside. At least Arthur isn't being a prat to Merlin anymore. I do hope that you will write more once this story has finished.

[alittlebrighter]

Yes you can, thankyou ^_^ and lol well thats what I was aiming for, so glad I got that right at least :-D and yeh I can't keep him being a prat too long, I like him 2 much :-S
And I wasn't planning too, but to be honest there's lots of stuff I really really wanted to get into this fic (eg will!) that I wasn't able to, so it looks like a possibility :-) will be summer though, I'm meant to be revising for my exams at the moment as it is ;-) glad you're still enjoying it xxx

[thepersephone]

Man, this is AMAZING. It's brilliant! ♥
This is my favourtie bit, its so beautiful, and ironically, the only mistakes I saw in the fic...

He said the last bit because somehow it fit with that statement. Because that was part of who he was now.” He bit his lip and looked at Merlin, holding his breath. The smile that he received took his breath away, and suddenly he had a lapful of Merlin kissing him to within an inch of his life.” Merlin drew back.

There are two random speech marks in there I don't think should be there...but apart from that, that part is my favourite..so beautiful and breathtaking!

[alittlebrighter]

Damn stupid speechmarks spoiling the good bit :-S thanks for pointing it out tho, fixed now hehe :-) and very glad you're still enjoying it, yay! ^_^ xxx

[justmyteacup]

oh how i love this!!!!
only two more chapters!!! noooo *holds on to fic*

oh arthur! how mushy can you be? sweet boy! i loved how nervous he was and how he couldn't stop touching merlin. i hope things are perfect for them from now on!

(im)patiently waiting for the next chapter!!!!

[alittlebrighter]

I know thats what i'm starting to feel like :-S you know this started off as a one-shot as well?! But now I'm sort of cautously half planning a sequal series :-S the plot bunny keeps escaping and running away and by the time I catch up with it we're not in Kansas anymore ;-s and I know, I should hav put warning for the mush, I can't help it :-s its my reward to myself for making him be so horrible to Merlin in chapter 2 hehe :-s glad you're still liking it though ^_^ oh and I love your icon, it's made of win ^^ next chap up soon :-D xxx

[fresica]

Awww~! *melts*

There was one thing, though, in the paragraph starting with He said the last bit because somehow it fit with that statement., you've got a few random quotation marks. ^^;

[alittlebrighter]

Hehe I melted you with the toxic radiation of all the FLUFFAGE! ;-) thanks for pointing the speech marks out, fixed now :-) lol I need a beta methinks :-S glad you're enjoying it xx

[noahvearn]

another 2 chapters!! can't wait for MOAR!!

[alittlebrighter]

Moar? Moar? Lol can do, thank the beeb for Mayday, gift for fic writers everywhere ;-) glad you're still enjoying it xxx