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[alittlebrighter]

Title: Routine
Rating: pg-13
Wordcount: ~1600
Warnings: Gratuitous shirtlessness and wet men ;-) implied smexing. Possible (probable) historical inaccuracies. 
Comments: I thought up this ficlet while swimming lengths this morning. When I got home I ran to the computer and banged this out in about an hour, while I should have been revising, so

Comments

[wlk68]

This was sweet!! :-)

[alittlebrighter]

Thankyou!! ^_^ glad you enjoyed :) xxxx

[alittlebrighter]

Thankyou ^_^ really glad you enjoyed and I LOVE nice and specific comments :D especially complemented to get this comment from YOU, your drabbles are awesome, 'rain' is like my favourite piece in this fandom ^_^
And I know, but then men are dense about just about everything right? ;) hehe
Thanks for commenting xxxx

[alittlebrighter]

Seconded wholeheartedly ♥ !!! And nope, DEFINATELY not annoying :) xxx

[podicus]

YOU DEDICATED A FIC TO ME?! Awwwwww thank you!!! I feel so loved :D :D

I'm going to get the nitpicking out of the way, but they're only little things:

end of the 3rd paragraph - until the early hours ofd the morning

6th paragraph - He found the rhythme soothing

there are a couple of times where you've got who's where it should be whose

Sorry, you know i'm an english geek :/
Now onto the good stuff :)
"I prefer to watch" - ahaha i bet you do! Wouldn't we all? :)

They still go to concerts and shows, but Watson is more aware these days of the hand on his leg, and the body pressed against his side, than he is of the music, and Holmes often lays his head against his shoulder as they discuss the show in the cab on the way home. - oh oh oh that's beautiful :) Love that bit

[alittlebrighter]

OF COURSE I DEDICATED A FIC TO YOU WOMAN!!!!! You're my muse!! ^_^ lol also I owe you like 3 for various birthdays and Christmases :-S

[podicus]

N'aw, you're too kind :)

Indeed, swimming!Watson can only be a good thing.

Intriguing...you should send her a really quick, really sweet drabble, and see if she goes for it - I was trying to think if I have any drabbles I've already done that I could send her but I could only think of the Royson/Hal one, so then I thought maybe I could just lend her Havemercy and see how she reacts to Royston/Hal? Although that may not be a fair test, they're so adorable they could turn even the most adamant homophobe into a pile of melted goo (no, I don't know where that came from either). Oh, and Rukhsaar called me a heterophobe today. I would be pleased if it weren't so counter-productive.

And how could you not notice Brittany/Santana?? They're adorable every scene they're in! (I needs me some Brittana icons) Hmm, not really wanting to slash jesse, he's too arrogant. Although I think he may be gay, some of the things he said: "you're an even bigger drama queen than me!" (also, st james is the surname of marc on ugly betty

[podicus]

Oh and thanks for the ♥ :) x

[alittlebrighter]

Lol yay!! Thankyou ^_^ wouldn't we all though? *nods wisely* lol thanks for commenting xxx

[gracefulfool]

Oh, very sweet - I like the contrast of their before and after routines! :)

[alittlebrighter]

Thankyou :) glad you liked it! I was going to finish it after the moment on the Launch, but I kinda thought it didn't feel finished, so I tied it back to the beginning sort of last minute :-S glad it worked :) thanks for commenting :) xxx