In the Rough, chapter 12/40

[alittleoddish]

Title: In the Rough (12/40)
Author: alittleoddish
Rating: Teen
Characters: Alice/Hatter, Jack/Duchess, Charlie
Disclaimer: I don't own any part of Syfy's Alice.
Summary: "But this is starting to sound like a quest! Quests are such a pain, Alice, they really are. All horseback and food rations and traveling in groups and no truly hot tea, with significantly less

Comments

[sweetone41185]

First of all I hope your hand is feeling better. That sounds really painful. Ouch.

Good chapter. I felt bad for Charlie when he was just sitting there listening to Alice and Hatter's argument. Talk about awkward. Lol. Looking forward to the next chapter.

[alittleoddish]

Aw, thanks so much for the concern. ^_^;; Burns are just part of working in a kitchen, I suppose, and I've been pretty lucky until now. I was karmically due. :P

I know, I feel so bad for Charlie... and Hatter and Alice fight a lot XD I imagine he'll just get used to it after awhile. At least he's got Percival... lol

[sweetone41185]

Welcome. Guess it is just one of those things that is inevitable. Karma sucks sometimes.

Yeah, I wouldn't want to be in his shoes right now. I figure Alice and Hatter fight a lot then make up a lot. Lol. Yes, Charlie does have him. :D

[alittleoddish]

Oh, Charlie! He's just adorable all the time. ♥ (And Alice and Hatter fight a lot, so I imagine that he just gets used to ignoring them. XD) I'm really glad you liked the chapter!

[alittleoddish]

Aw, thank you! ^_^ That's really sweet! ♥ ♥ ♥ Don't worry, I already have next week's chapter written, so it won't be delayed! Lol

[volturikisses]

I love when Hatter and Alice fight. They get so cute when they stop :D I would like to see them get into a really big fight and then have them not make up right afterwards, just to see how they do with eachother.

Sorry about your hand! Can't wait for the next chapter.

[alittleoddish]

A big fight is coming. They're both trying to pretend that it's not, but they can both feel it. :/ That's what I love about Alice and Hatter, and that's why I love writing their relationship so much -- for all of the weirdness that surrounds them, they are such a NORMAL couple. (Am I making sense? -_-;; Maybe not...)

In any case, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, and thanks so much for your concern about my hand! ♥ That's so sweet.

[queenbellaloca]

Oooh, I sense troublleee~ Is it wrong that I'm excited?? lol

And I hope you heal quickly! *hugs*

[alittleoddish]

Aw, thanks for your concern! <3 Haha oh yes, trouble is definitely on the horizon... X3 I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!