In the Rough, chapter 16/40

[alittleoddish]

Title: In the Rough (16/40)
Author: alittleoddish
Rating: Teen
Characters: Alice/Hatter, Jack/Duchess, Charlie
Disclaimer: I don't own any part of Syfy's Alice.
Summary: "But this is starting to sound like a quest! Quests are such a pain, Alice, they really are. All horseback and food rations and traveling in groups and no truly hot tea, with significantly less

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[pennywhistle]

GO ALICE!!

This chapter had me on the edge of my seat! Glad you're back ^_^

[alittleoddish]

Thanks! I'm glad to be back. ^_^ I really needed the break -- I've got the rest of the story outlined now, for instance, instead of just in my head. And I've got a bunch of chapters ahead written so that I can stay on-schedule. XD It's gonna be great, I'm really excited. Glad you liked the chapter! <3

[klcthebookworm]

“Don’t be in such a rush,” Hatter complained. “We’re walking to our deaths, here.”

She raised one dark eyebrow at him. “So melodramatic?”

“It’s a special occasion.”

Charlie frowned a bit in thought. “Really? It seems as though we do this sort of thing rather often.” -- Out of the mouths of babes and Charlie. Truth hurts but it's funny.

She also ignored the fighting instincts that itched in her shoulders, all the way down to her fingertips. -- Hmm, is Alice sensing Lory in a way?

[alittleoddish]

Speaking truths is Charlie's specialty. XD And I wouldn't put it so much "Alice sensing Lory" as "Alice's fighting instincts sensing danger", lol. I'm glad you liked the chapter!