Delinquent [15/24]

May 12, 2008 12:11

Delinquent [15/24] by all_tattooed
Frank/Gerard [NC-17 - language, violence, crime, mentions of drugs & alcohol, sex ...etc.]
RPS. Don't know. Don't own. No harm intended.
~3282 words.

Summary: When Frank goes to Juvy, his counselor reforms him in a questionable manner.

Thanks to skelterellax for beta'ing. xo

Con-Crit welcome. Comments are nice.

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boobookittifukk May 12 2008, 04:00:53 UTC
Fuck. I had a mini-heart attack when the cop pulled them over too!
I'm torn in two now though. On one hand, we will get hot, kinky, office/desk/floor/wall sex where Gerard will indeed put his hand over Frank's mouth to keep him quiet while he fucks Frank into the desk/floor/wall/any flat surface, and thats HOT. *fans self* On the other hand, if they get caught, Gerard is going to be in HUGE trouble.

Oh god. Can't wait for more. =)

P.S. Did notice a couple of mistakes, like "preying" should be "praying", and "coping" instead of "copping".

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all_tattooed May 12 2008, 04:10:32 UTC
Oh, thank you *runs to fix*

And your comment had my smiling like an idiot btw, thank you. XD

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boobookittifukk May 12 2008, 04:17:09 UTC
I aim to please. XD
Or it could just be because I'm so enthusiastic over kinky secret illegal office sex. ;)

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all_tattooed May 12 2008, 04:27:46 UTC
lol. Could be, either way, you are amazing.

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ikle_pattikins May 12 2008, 04:05:23 UTC
i seriously thought they were busted when the cop stopped them, so glad it was just because of the tail light
for a moment at the end i thought gerard was going to end but i'm so glad he didn't
you made me so happy when i saw that you updated
love this story
<3

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all_tattooed May 12 2008, 04:13:26 UTC
XD Thanks so much.

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whitechinadoll May 12 2008, 04:15:51 UTC
gah *flails*

is this a hint that something bad may be on the way???? and man, Frank was nervous when that copper showed up? how do you think I felt??? lmao.

I love the characterisation in this story, it's adorable!
x

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all_tattooed May 13 2008, 06:37:57 UTC
:D Thanks.

I don't know if i'm supposed to point out hints or not, unless that was a rhetorical question?

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whitechinadoll May 25 2008, 07:26:35 UTC
haha yeah, ot pretty much was rhetorical...and damn, something bad did happen anyways (in relation to setting the poor kid's hands on fire!)...lolz
x

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unicorn_biscuit May 12 2008, 08:10:16 UTC
Yours Truly, Mr. Gerard Way, aka, child molester.

Guh, yes. The hottest child molester EVER.
*squee*
OMFG I wasn't going to get outta bed tonight, but now I'm happy I did!
HURRAY FOR AWESOME CHAPTERS! <3 <3 <3

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all_tattooed May 13 2008, 06:39:00 UTC
XD Thankies.

<3

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annie_dear May 12 2008, 10:26:05 UTC
Love it, as always.

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