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Bubble (an original story)

Feb 06, 2011 01:07

Title: Bubble
Summary: Ever since she could remember, she was trapped inside a bubble.
Rating: T
Prompt: IU_fanfiction Writing Challenge # 32 - Based on a true story
Notes: Original story. Not really a story per se, actually. I'm not sure what it is, but I had the urge to write it. So yeah. Sorry for the graphic nature of some parts. Not too bad naman ( Read more... )

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Comments 3

Hugs~ mizumi888 February 6 2011, 06:50:17 UTC

I know.

You wrote an interesting piece here, with the girl in the bubble. I love it. The whole thing just spoke to me. I can see the parallels in real life.

I want you to write more. And more. And even more. Don't stop like I do occasionally 'cause you're good at it! ^_^

Re: Hugs~ allaynia February 6 2011, 09:41:05 UTC

Did this really hit you? It was my pondering on things mostly and I needed a creative outlet. It just so happens that it was in line with a prompt. Hehe. XD

neko11lover February 10 2011, 09:38:54 UTC

I like the images you used at the first part and the emotions (plus your use of POV) in the later part *A*

All she wanted to do was run. All she wanted to do was get away. It didn't matter how she did so, but she just wanted to escape. She wanted to escape the pain. She wanted to escape it all. She wanted to feel safe.

This was the most striking bit for me.

Thank you for putting this up!! iui Seconding Al!