Comments | alley_cat6805: So Many Words...

alley_cat6805

So Many Words...

Mar 02, 2006 21:07

Well hey there.
I need some Opinions.
I wrote a speech for my
High School GSA (gay/straight alliance) group
for a teacher training we are doing in April.
Tell Me what you think okay...

Why Fight For Gay, Lesbian, Bisexual, and Transgender Equality?

Apparently, how we act is more important that who we are,
and if we raise our voices -we're flaunting ( Read more... )

Comments 22

ucntkillheroes March 3 2006, 05:06:27 UTC

:) that was beautiful!

alley_cat6805 March 4 2006, 01:36:06 UTC

thanks dollface ♥

its katie!!! anonymous March 3 2006, 05:11:19 UTC

all i have to say is you are amazing and that speech was amazing!!! oh and i love and miss you!!! <3

Re: its katie!!! alley_cat6805 March 4 2006, 01:36:31 UTC

awww <3 thanks darling!!! i love and miss you too!!!!

lindsay loo anonymous March 3 2006, 17:25:19 UTC

alley my little cuzin im so so proud of you.. your speech was truely touching and i printed it out to show the world what your standing up for.. i stand hundred percent behind you.. keep it up you will change the world.. love you
linds

Re: lindsay loo alley_cat6805 March 4 2006, 01:37:28 UTC

awwww linds thank you so much that really means SOOOO much to me. i miss you so much. we really need to hang out. i love you bunches. thank you for believing in me ♥

lenatheraven March 3 2006, 19:18:13 UTC

ok, on a completely educational level, I want to give you feedback. Please don't be offended but I took too many classes on public speech to not tell you this ( ... )

alley_cat6805 March 4 2006, 01:41:25 UTC

thank you SO much for the feedback.
I was not offended at all what so ever.

constructive critisism is DEFINITELY welcome.

I want my speech to be the best it possibly can be and
i greatly appriciate you taking the time out to let me
know some things i could edit. I will definitely fix the
"ands" and the "i believes" hehe

And thank you for respecting what i said and just taking the
time to read it period.

Someday the world will see we are equal. Best of luck to you.
and thanks again darling. ♥

PS I LOVE YOUR ICON!!!! RENT IS BEAUTIFUL!!

thisbequeerchik March 4 2006, 06:04:01 UTC

One other thing, in the first line, "Apparently, how we act is more important that who we are," 'that' should be 'than'.

Other than that, I think the speech rocks!

alley_cat6805 March 4 2006, 21:51:44 UTC

yikes!!! that was a typo hahaha it should have been than anyways lol oops

Thread 5

derrster March 3 2006, 20:50:36 UTC

i loved it!
i hate how all the black kids in my school hate gay people yet get mad when someone's racist.
and i go to catholic school and when we talk about how god loves everyone and his message is how were all human and equal how the bible doesnt even follow it.
so fucked up.
i really really liked your speech though.

alley_cat6805 March 4 2006, 01:42:51 UTC

omg i say the SAME thing about the bible thing.
i HATE that.
It made me SO confused about my religion because
i grew up being catholic... and then once i was old
enough to understand the bible and what it was saying..
i felt so unwanted in my church yanno?
But thank you for liking my speech :):):)