Three Little Words

Oct 28, 2011 14:15

Someone else has been living in my flat, I'm sure of it.  I've given up trying to explain it to my friends - they all think I'm mad, all except Molly, who, in her typical New Age fashion, instead declared that I have an infestation of pixies and offered to come and do a spiritual cleansing for me.  Sweet of her, but unnecessary.  I'm positive that ( Read more... )

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mac_arthur_park October 28 2011, 16:19:05 UTC
Great writing, chilling, and I am NOT opening any closets or cabinets today.

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alleyalligator October 29 2011, 11:26:44 UTC
Thanks.

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nyxocity October 28 2011, 16:57:22 UTC
LOVED this! So engaging from the very first line, and I was wondering the whole time how it would end. Can't tell you how much I enjoy a creepy tale! Well done!

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alleyalligator October 29 2011, 11:27:23 UTC
Thank you so much. Once I figured out what three word notes could say, the story pretty much wrote itself.

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ceiphiedknight October 28 2011, 17:49:10 UTC
I really liked this! Stories with a creepy vibe like this, often open-ended, really get to me! The last line gave me chills, great job!

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alleyalligator October 29 2011, 11:27:45 UTC
Thanks!

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pricelessone October 28 2011, 18:23:42 UTC
So vivid, and elicits so many emotions! You have a really clear narrative voice that stands out.

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alleyalligator October 29 2011, 11:28:16 UTC
Thank you - that's really sweet of you.

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n3m3sis42 October 28 2011, 19:14:50 UTC
This was really good! I got chills at the end. What a compelling story with a great twist.

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alleyalligator October 29 2011, 11:28:57 UTC
Thank you.

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