Taking A Knife To A Gunfight

Mar 04, 2012 14:31


Everyone knows that if you survive seven bouts in the arena, you will be granted your freedom.  Everyone also knows that this is a lie, that even if you are lucky enough to outwit, outplay and outlast your opponents, there’ll be some reason why you ‘choose’ to stay, that the Masters will find some little incentive to keep you there.  Publicly, this ( Read more... )

taking a knife to a gun fight

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copyright1983 March 6 2012, 05:41:10 UTC
Color me hooked. Well done!

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alleyalligator March 7 2012, 20:14:34 UTC
Thanks!

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basric March 6 2012, 07:35:23 UTC
Awk! This is terrible. I hate cliff hangars. More More more.

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alleyalligator March 7 2012, 20:15:09 UTC
LOL! I guess we'll just have to see what future prompts allow :D

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sarcasmoqueen March 6 2012, 15:10:21 UTC
Wow, that was terrific!

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alleyalligator March 7 2012, 20:17:19 UTC
Thanks!

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m_malcontent March 6 2012, 18:51:38 UTC
This is really well done, can't wait for the next installment.

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alleyalligator March 7 2012, 20:19:09 UTC
Thanks! I'm not sure that there will be another installment, but you never know :D

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whipchick March 6 2012, 19:38:43 UTC
What a terrific set-up! I love how you show what's going on in his head, and also give us the wider world without a lot of words. Very engaging and compelling.

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alleyalligator March 7 2012, 20:14:03 UTC
Thank you!

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