The Straw That Stirs The Drink

[alleyalligator]

Brooke felt a tap on her shoulder.  “What are you doing here?”

She turned around to see Cat sitting behind her.  “Er… seeing a movie?”  She indicated the cinema around her to demonstrate what a stupid question she thought it was.   “I’m on a date.  What are you doing here?  I thought you’d said you were going to stop following me.”

“You know how it

Comments

[cheshire23]

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OK yeah. I didn't see that one coming at all. Well played.

[alleyalligator]

Cool! That's the problem with writing stuff that usually has a twist - you worry that it becomes predictable. I'm glad I pulled it off.

[minnesattva]

What a fun read :)

[alleyalligator]

Thanks!

[n3m3sis42]

Eeeeeeep. Somehow, I had a feeling there was something off about that angel.

[alleyalligator]

It was probably its use of the word "bum" :P

[sarcasmoqueen]

Love love loved it, and so honoured to have collaborated with you!

[alleyalligator]

You were on my list of people I wanted to work with, so I'm so glad we made it happen :D

[copyright1983]

Okay, wow. It's stories like this that almost make me scared to fall in love. (Almost.)

Well done, both of you!

[alleyalligator]

Thanks!