A Bridge Too Far

Apr 07, 2012 22:36


Look, you knew what I was like when you married me.  I did my best - you wanted me to stop playing and I tried the nine to five thing for a bit and we both know how well that worked out.  Poker’s always been my life and we’ve had a really good life on what I won.  It’s not my fault that they were rigging the game.  How was I to know they were ( Read more... )

bridge, intersection, the-day-setup

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lawchicky April 11 2012, 02:55:22 UTC
So creepy!!!

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alleyalligator April 11 2012, 13:26:29 UTC
Thanks!

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karmasoup April 12 2012, 15:46:51 UTC
And, there it is. Goods delivered, as per your usual.

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alleyalligator April 13 2012, 19:38:54 UTC
Happy to be of service, ma'am!

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minnesattva April 13 2012, 10:26:55 UTC
I love this. It hits hard.

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alleyalligator April 13 2012, 19:39:58 UTC
Thanks - the-day-setup was a great partner and it was a lot of fun working on the concept with him.

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whirlgig April 15 2012, 13:25:02 UTC
I love internal monologue-style writing, and you've done this so well! Just enough info withheld from the audience to cause thrilling tension :)

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alleyalligator April 15 2012, 22:08:31 UTC
Thanks!

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whipchick April 16 2012, 15:15:43 UTC
Creepy as can be, and I definitely didn't see the end coming! Excellent writing, as always :)

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alleyalligator April 18 2012, 17:50:28 UTC
Thanks!

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