Sated

[alleyalligator]

“When did you say she was going to be back?” Donna asked, yawning and stretching before artfully rearranging herself on the sofa to subtly push her breasts up in Harry’s direction.

“She should have been back half an hour ago,” he replied, peeping through the net curtains.  “Something’s wrong.”  A worried frown wrinkled his brow and Donna’s attempts

Comments

[ashgaelsonaria]

Och.
Hope Harry can defend himself. That's one nasty peace of work.
Nice story.

[alleyalligator]

Something tells me that Harry has a lucky escape - Donna tends to cut her losses and move on and why waste energy killing someone who doesn't appreciate your effort??

[tigrkittn]

Oh, so twisted! Your tales never ever disappoint!

[alleyalligator]

:D Thanks! I knew that I wanted to do something like this as soon as I read on cracked about the serial killer who'd planned on killing a woman but she was late home that day. He got bored waiting, so wrote her a poem and left. He never did come back to finish the job, but how much would that mess with your head??

[whipchick]

Love the dark humor here - quite a pair!

[alleyalligator]

Thanks!

[halfshellvenus]

Harry's rant about Donna's random demands was my favorite part of this whole thing. They could be true, they could be exaggerated, but really-- the heads of five old ladies, and knucklebones of real-estate agents? Those are some bizarre stipulations!

[alleyalligator]

You've got to wonder how desperate someone would have to be to get their leg over to even consider doing something like that!

[n3m3sis42]

Hahahaha... I like the idea of a jilted... demon? My male character this week was Harry, too!

[alleyalligator]

I don't think of her as a demon so much as a girl who has a very twisted sense of how you demonstrate love.

Harry was very nearly called Hank, but that's not a usual name in the UK and I didn't want to confuse people with the Eastenders reference!