Walking On Eggshells

May 19, 2012 12:44


You know that feeling in the pit of your stomach, that heavy, leaden weight that sits there, tearing up your insides, when you know that you’ve done something wrong and there’s nothing you can do to make it right?

Yeah.  That feeling was my best buddy, my constant companion ever since I’d agreed to deliver a certain package and then got so drunk ( Read more... )

walking on eggshells

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similiesslip May 19 2012, 16:13:02 UTC
This entry had several twists and turns that surprised me. Great job as I am not easy to surprise!

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alleyalligator May 21 2012, 12:08:23 UTC
Thanks! I decided to go happy this week and there's nothing more happy than birthday parties!

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basric May 19 2012, 22:01:19 UTC
A dark divinely twisted entry. Enjoyed.

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alleyalligator May 21 2012, 12:08:38 UTC
Thanks!

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jacq22 May 20 2012, 03:01:24 UTC
Wonderful twists. Nice to be so different. Wasn't expecting any of this. Excellent.

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alleyalligator May 21 2012, 12:09:59 UTC
Thanks! I figured that people would expect dark and twisty so I thought about what would be an unexpectedly happy ending and birthday parties are happy! Even if they are put on by dark demon overlords...

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myrna_bird May 21 2012, 21:33:26 UTC
I enjoyed this. An interesting story and unexpected ending!

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alleyalligator May 22 2012, 13:16:16 UTC
Thanks!

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alien_infinity May 22 2012, 00:38:30 UTC
You definitely surprised me with this. Nice job! :)

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alleyalligator May 22 2012, 13:17:09 UTC
Thanks! It's hard work coming up with new surprises, but I reckon I've still got a few yet :D

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