Walking On Eggshells

[alleyalligator]

You know that feeling in the pit of your stomach, that heavy, leaden weight that sits there, tearing up your insides, when you know that you’ve done something wrong and there’s nothing you can do to make it right?

Yeah.  That feeling was my best buddy, my constant companion ever since I’d agreed to deliver a certain package and then got so drunk

Comments

[theafaye]

Interesting!

[alleyalligator]

Thanks!

[whipchick]

Wow, fascinating twists! I love the idea of being kidnapped and having it turn out to be a birthday party, and this is a neat world!

[alleyalligator]

Thanks! There are all sorts of elements woven in here, but the basic inspiration was that I wanted to do something cheerful for a change...

[imafarmgirl]

Twisted way to get around to a birthday party. Nice job.

[alleyalligator]

Thanks! And I hear it's your birthday today - hope it's fantastic.

[imafarmgirl]

Thank you. It was.

[jem0000000]

I love the world you've set up here - very nice.

[alleyalligator]

Thanks.

[lrig_rorrim]

I really enjoyed this. I think what got me smiling the most was "Lore Enforcement". Heh. Brilliant! I'd love to read more in this world!

[alleyalligator]

Thanks. I couldn't resist that little pun. This world definitely has more potential for exploring.