He was so small

[allforyou1256]

Oh god it was so hot that day and to make matters worse I had to wear jeans. We were complaining about the hot and heavy air on the bus ride to the hospice center. Some were talking happily about who knows what because they didn’t mind the heat. Others did. Finally after getting lost twice and seeing the “wear a condom” sign three times we were

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portfolio

[anonymous]

Its good, i like the beginning, but the end confuses me...i don't understand it, its like there is something missing that i don't know of. why do you want to give him to his mother and world? It seems like you always write little tid bits of things for english, but they always have somehting missing that makes it confusing, but other than that, its cool...
xoxo
~Jen

Re: portfolio

[allforyou1256]

He doesn't have a mother or father or any family, and I felt horrible because I couldn't give him that...That's what a hospice center is..a place where parents can drop children off that they don't want anymore