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[poloparadise]

I can't stop writing Karen/Bill fic! Heres another one for you guys -- crossposted to karen_bill

Title: Weight of the WorldAuthor: me, poloparadise

Comments

awwwwwwww

[ladyofavalon77]

That was so sweet...I love how she tries to lure him back to bed. Such a cute married couple :D

Re: awwwwwwww

[poloparadise]

I know *huggles the cuteness that is Karen&Bill*

Shes such the protector, always worried, I could see her trying to pick up the pieces of everyones elses lives even if they couldn't.

Thanks for your comments :)

[anonymous]

Beautiful. You have a real gift for drawing the reader into the story. I like how you portray the gentle and nurturing aspects to their relationship.

[poloparadise]

This was such a sweet comment and a perfect analysis of what I was trying to portray.
thanks
♥