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alliekatgal

New Fic: Small Packages

Jun 05, 2006 11:15

Title: Small Packages

Author: alliekatgal

Rating: Adult

Pairing: HP/SS
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Comments 52

medawyn June 6 2006, 00:47:23 UTC

Snape describing Harry's cock as cute just made me giggle. Probably a good thing he didn't do it aloud; I can't think of many men of my acquaintance who would appreciate such a description.

I highly endorse repeat experiments. We want to be sure that our data is sound before we draw any conclusions. Yay for hot smut and virgin!Harry... and of course, the Snarry. We love the Snarry.

alliekatgal June 6 2006, 02:00:01 UTC

Severus has a pretty strong sense of self-preservation, so he knows when to keep his mouth closed. I suppose magic and science shouldn't go together, but Severus really is a scientist, so of course he would need plenty of data before he'd be able to draw any final conclusions. And yes, we do indeed love the Snarry!

werewindle June 6 2006, 01:48:15 UTC

Lovely. ^_^

alliekatgal June 6 2006, 02:00:27 UTC

Thank you! :)

friendtoanimals June 6 2006, 02:00:00 UTC

I loved this. Way to go. I think this is the best one I have read in a long time. Perhaps a sequel? (crosses fingers)

accioslash June 6 2006, 02:09:03 UTC

You had me at the title. *g* Like painless_j, smallcock!Harry is a kink of mine.

I enjoyed how *human* the fic was. I can imagine Harry being embarrassed about the size of his penis and secretly wondering if there was something wrong with him and doubting that anyone would ever wnat to be with him sexually because of his size. I can see Ron making fun of Harry's small cock in the showers, and I can see Snape use the...er scientific process to determine if Harry did, in fact, need further medical consultation. Great job!

alliekatgal June 6 2006, 02:16:10 UTC

Now I'm going to be hunting for this kink, as I haven't seen any where this is the focus. Poor Harry, the things he goes through. At least Severus is there for him, and Harry understands what he is really saying when he goes on about the need for more experimentation.

alliekatgal June 6 2006, 02:17:18 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed this!

hambares June 6 2006, 03:24:12 UTC

"He couldn’t pinpoint"....Very clever wording! LOL

I think I want to go cuddle up in ved with a nice Snape plushie. He was so sweet in your fic.
we’ll need to do this many more times to ensure that everything is working as it ought to.” - Just what Harry needed to hear! REally enjoyed this offering. Thanx for sharing!

alliekatgal June 6 2006, 03:29:45 UTC

I'm so glad to hear that you enjoyed this! Thank you!