Be Honest!

[allislost13]

Okay, this journal entry is going to be a little weird but you guys gotta stick with me here... lol

Comments

[traptinme]

it is definately a 10...im not just saying that. i like it alot b/c it is true...alot of times people become more encompassed in making their "friends" feel good about themselves, when in actuality the "friends" should extend a hand in times of need to return the favor. those that do indeed extend a hand of friendliness in times of need are those ones that you need to hold close to you, b/c tehy are the ones that remain true to you!

[allislost13]

Thank you sean! You got exactly what I was trying to get out in that poem.. Seriously when I wrote it on Wednesday, I was like upset after I finished it because I realized thats what A LOT of people go through. I dunno, but you understand. lol thanks for the 10! love yah big brother

Wills comments on the poem

[anonymous]

it was wonderful. i orgasmed all over the toaster oven after i read it.

the end

-Willy

ps HELLP!!!!!!

Re: Wills comments on the poem

[allislost13]

all over the toaster oven?! nice!!! lol but wait DON'T DO THAT... then we can't make toaster studle because there'll be Jiz all over the place.. ewwwww! I don't like Jiz on my toaster strudles... just the icing they give you! lol

HELLP!!!

[lesserritual]

good poem, put more of a rhyme scheme on it, and keep a consistent syllebol structure.

-Nick

[allislost13]

Thanks Nick.. I'll remember what you said for the next poem I write. great show, but I got bit all over by damn bugs and now part of my calf is the size of a golf ball! lol

-nae