We're only pretending

Jun 16, 2009 09:40

Title: We're only pretending
Rating: T
Pairing: Gibbs/Abby
Genre: Hurt/Comfort
Disclaimer: I own nothing. =(
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forensicfang June 17 2009, 00:57:22 UTC
That was so good! Like, I give it a ten out of ten. Well written and everything! I haven't read a good one like that in a few weeks. Good work I hope you write more great ones soon.

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allison_house June 17 2009, 06:54:29 UTC
Thank you so much for commenting! I'm already working on the next one. It's just so easy with both of them. ^^

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capnhobbes June 17 2009, 14:25:49 UTC
Wow, wonderfully written! I love the imagery and details. And it makes me wonder what the big secret/reason is...

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allison_house June 17 2009, 14:53:22 UTC
Thanks for commenting! I'm very glad you liked it.
When it came to the big secret I just choose not to name it so the reader could think of the one, they would like to see. If that makes any sense. ^^

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capnhobbes June 17 2009, 15:18:01 UTC
Yep, it makes perfect sense. Such a tease, though =P haha.

Ahh, the icon! O=D

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pearllane June 17 2009, 17:09:37 UTC
Fantastic! This is so beautiful in the way it tells the story of all Abby's emotions and love and everything else.The flow of your writing brilliant, super job!

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allison_house June 17 2009, 18:00:21 UTC
Thank you, thank you, thank you!
I'm flattered! :)

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plug_in_baby June 17 2009, 18:23:33 UTC
Argh, honey!
This is so dark and so beautiful. *sigh*
I love how managed to put all those emotions into so few words <3
I love the image of Gibbs comforting Abby without asking. He's just there for her - it's so....them xD
Just amazing e_e *hugs you tightly*

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allison_house June 17 2009, 18:33:19 UTC
Cupcake! e___e
Thank you so much. I'm so glad you liked it. You know how much grey hairs I get when it comes to english writing. <,<# But the words are much more like music than german ones.
So I'm off writing my Stillwater-Oneshot. xD
Lurve yaaaaaa!

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plug_in_baby June 17 2009, 19:28:35 UTC
Awww you're welcome, hun <3
Yeah! English words are really more like music than german ones...that's why I barely read any german fanfic anymore.
I wish I could write like you do - it's just....perfect! *_*
lurve ya too!

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chirugal June 17 2009, 21:19:19 UTC
Gorgeous fic, really gorgeous. :) I love it.

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allison_house June 17 2009, 21:27:09 UTC
thank you so much for commenting. I LOVE you and your stories. You're like the master of Gibbs/Abby. e_e THANK YOU SO MUCH!

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chirugal June 17 2009, 21:29:30 UTC
*hug* Awww, that's sweet of you. *blush* I'm glad you like my stuff, and I'm REALLY glad to see a new and talented Gabby writer appear on the scene. Write more more more!

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