When I Say [1/1]

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Title: When I Say [1/1

Comments

[pixie_rings]

I like this. I like this a lot. It's like you've taken a piece of my Franada headcanon and written it perfectly. Given the glorification of rape and dubcon I've seen in yaoi in general, this is welcome and refreshing. And I can't see Francis as being anything but the most considerate of lovers, especially to the one he loves. Also, he knows the rules: no is no, stop is stop.

You write very nicely, too. Thank you for this. :)

[alliterations]

Thank you very much! I'm glad it could be something you enjoy. And yeah, I wholeheartedly agree with that bit about Francis.

Thanks so much for reading!

[pixie_rings]

You're welcome!

[xellia]

I absolutely loved this. It's different from what you usually write - fluff and cuteness and all that - but it still fits into the view of their relationship you created.
And deep down I'm happy that finally some justice has been done to the rapist France stereotype, which annoys me a lot :|

[alliterations]

Yeah, it was a little different, but I felt this needed to be written. That stereotype irritates me too :|
Thanks so much for reading~

[measuringlife]

Yay, you finally posted it!

I love this piece. France's narrative is really heartbreaking and nearly brings tears to my eyes. And the fluff at the end... ;x; Lovve. ♥

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I did!

I'm glad you liked it so much~

[robingurl]

THANK you for writing this. Seriously. You got the real france from my head out and on paper! ....I want your kids /shot

great story! *favorites*

<3
Robin Gurl

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It's my pleasure to write~ Thanks so much for reading!

[souslelys]

I loved it. You addressed the issue perfectly in the writing. Francis' reaction and Matthew's assurance suit their characters well! :)

I enjoyed reading this very much!

[alliterations]

I'm glad you think so! Thanks so much for reading~