Part One of 'Tis Midnight

[allizarin]

Here, I've posted the first part of the chapter, which is about 6,700 words long. I have about 4,000 more words to go. Wish me luck! I want to finish it by tomorrow!

This is part one of the chapter, 'Tis Midnight.

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Harry lay on the sticky wet ground and felt an eternity pass by before him. A thousand threads of thought pulsed from every

Comments

[arkeus]

Very good beginning, though voldemort once more is a bit too cocky... marking as an equel must not be a choice like that, i tink. Good work, hope to see the rest soon :-)

[anonymous]

A great chapter, glad you're updating again, I was getting anxious for this battle, and am eagerly anticipating the next part.

I do have one question, in this chapter, Voldie says, "You are no longer protected by a piece of my soul, which I have given to another." Does this mean that the snake that went into Neville was the piece of Voldie's soul that Harry brought back with him? If so, why would he then be preparing to make an eighth Horcrux using Harry and the signet ring?

Also, if Neville is now protected as Harry was before, then the method of temporarily defeating Tommy-boy seams pretty obvious. Accio Neville as Voldie casts the Killing Curse, and viola, fried Voldie.

Again, great chapter, loved the action,
--G.Shans

Pretty good!

[anonymous]

This chapter had me going with all the different battle spells. I HATE it when authors are like "Harry uses stunners because thats what seperates him from the Death Eaters." Its a war, there was a time for diplomacy but that time has passed, so kill those bastards. Anyway the more Death Eaters Harry kills the more I'll love this story.

You said on FFN that you would have the next chapter up by tomorrow and that was yesterday. I'm NOT nagging you... I'm just concerned... about the next chapter... cause I don't care about you LOLOLOLOL! JKJKJKJKJKJK! I love you!

[2121o16177]

Сидя в этом allizarinя скоро дистрофиком стану, мне ж и поесть приготовить-то некогда, ахотя я очень голодна