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Nov 02, 2010 11:38

title: Love Hate Relationship
pairing: Brendon Urie/Spencer Smith
word count: 5000+
author's notes: This was written awhile ago in my old fic journal for maggiesynders based on this picture. I did a little editing to it and am now re-posting it for everyone to read. :)

Just his luck that it turns out to be Spencer Smith, the one person he hated most. )

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pr_scatterbrain November 3 2010, 03:04:16 UTC
Oh, this was lovely

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alllover November 3 2010, 03:54:53 UTC
Thank you. :)

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mariquitahelena November 3 2010, 12:57:33 UTC
Aww! So lovely! :)
Spencer is an awesome friend even thought Brendon doesn't make it easy for him in the beginning.

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alllover November 3 2010, 15:02:03 UTC
Mhm, thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. :)

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alljustlovers November 4 2010, 11:08:51 UTC
This story was so sweet! I really loved the way you wrote the progression of Brendon's feelings towards Spencer and the way Spencer just seemed to grow more fond of Brendon. I love love love high school stories, especially love/hate ones, and this one did not disappoint.

I do think though that, at times, the spelling/grammar mistakes were a little distracting from this otherwise awesome story. A little bit of constructive criticism would be to have another beta do a second comb-through for you maybe?

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alllover November 4 2010, 15:16:37 UTC
Thank you, glad you liked it! And yeah, I was looking for a second one to beta now since my current one is busy so thanks for the concrit too. Much appreciated. :)

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alljustlovers November 4 2010, 19:34:15 UTC
No problem!
If you ever need a beta, you can drop me a line if you'd like :]

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alllover November 4 2010, 20:36:06 UTC
That would be lovely if you're up for it. :) I'm trying to work on a million and one fics soooooooo... betas are of great need to me rn.

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mikeyunicorn November 5 2010, 05:34:24 UTC
This was so lovely, poor Spencer at the beginning ohh I really wanted to punch Brendon in the face, really great job! <3

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alllover November 5 2010, 05:46:47 UTC
Hahaha, yeah, Brendon was kind of a jerk. Thank you though, glad you enjoyed it. :)

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alt_3_etf November 5 2010, 08:35:04 UTC
Aw ^^wwwwwwh

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alllover November 5 2010, 13:54:47 UTC
Haha, thank you! :)

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