"packing bags into bags he filled the room with heat his finger glared down the street was calling our name he pointed to show you the way"
this is fucking great.
aside from the imagery (which works works works so fucking well) i enjoy the internal rhyme scheme that pops up. don t know if it is intentional or not.
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he filled the room with
heat his finger glared down
the street was calling our name
he pointed to show you the way"
this is fucking great.
aside from the imagery (which works works works so fucking well) i enjoy the internal rhyme scheme that pops up. don t know if it is intentional or not.
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