[fic] just trying to get the good (2/2), ben/april, nc-17, 15000 words

Jul 16, 2011 12:57

Title: Just Trying to Get the Good (Part 2/2)
Author: allthingsholy
Pairing: Ben/April (Parks & Rec)
Rating: R? NC-17? Let's say NC-17.
Words: ~15000 total; ~6500 this part.
Notes: Thanks so much to cypanache for looking over all of this one, two, three times and helping me work out some plot and characterization kinks. Thanks to ishie for the once-over and slybrunette for being the ( Read more... )

fic, ben/april, parks and rec

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kolms April 19 2012, 08:44:07 UTC
Oh man, this is fantastic.

First off, I love your Ben. (Then let me list off all the other things I love.) Your descriptions of April and her dialogue is so spot on, the heartbreaking imagery throughout and how they both just kind of fall together (or rather find each other at the bottom). I love the repetition of the headlines throughout a lot a lot, it seems like kind of a small thing, but it speaks so much for the progression of the story.

So so good. It hurt but it wasn't hopeless you tied it up so so well. Gosh, because I needed more Parks ships. (but really, I need all the Parks ships.....)

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madisonishere October 6 2012, 19:32:21 UTC
Like everyone else said, this was amazing! It went in a really creative direction and I loved it so much! Heartbreaking but hopeful at the same time. I seriously ship Ben/April so hard, it's ridiculous.

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