Sorry its taken me a while to actually read this. It isnt that i didnt want to, its just i wanted to get better associated with the story and characters itself before hand. So now that i have seen Deimon Devilbats games against the Bando Spiders, with Musashis return to the field, i can finally read your gals fic. (And for a while now, i was wondering how it was possible for Hiruma to not be the dominant one in any pairing)
That being said, this fic was amazing. I do think the two of you have managed to wonderfully capture the personalities and essence of each of the characters. Even the with the concept of Hiruma...in the kitchen...in an apron, which just seemed so wrong to me when i first read the blurb. But somehow you two even managed to make that just seem so right~. I wish i just even had a fraction of the writing talent you two ladies have
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Tigger!! Thank you so very much for reading this! Don't worry, we have the next bit ready to post. We just got busy and then gogo got sick. But it'll be posted very, very soon! It just needs a final read through and then it's good to go
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Topping from the bottom seems so weird to me, as i demonstrated to LCP when we were lounging around on the couch the other day XD Not sure exactly how it works out...i understand the verbal side of things i guess...not sure how the actually topping would take place though O_o"
Well, perhaps it would be easier or better to show rather than tell? In which case, have a look at Part 2 of this, fic which was just posted, oh...about 5 minutes ago. Hiruma does an exemplary job of topping from the bottom, and will continue to do so in Part 3.
((and...you demonstrated topping from the bottom, or tried to, with LCP on a couch? SOUNDS KINKY.))
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. We're SO glad you enjoyed it. We're absolutely crazy about Musashi and Hiruma and are so thrilled to make E21 and Mushiruma fans happy with our writing.
Thank you, again. The comment is appreciated more than you know!
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That being said, this fic was amazing. I do think the two of you have managed to wonderfully capture the personalities and essence of each of the characters. Even the with the concept of Hiruma...in the kitchen...in an apron, which just seemed so wrong to me when i first read the blurb. But somehow you two even managed to make that just seem so right~. I wish i just even had a fraction of the writing talent you two ladies have ( ... )
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Well, perhaps it would be easier or better to show rather than tell? In which case, have a look at Part 2 of this, fic which was just posted, oh...about 5 minutes ago. Hiruma does an exemplary job of topping from the bottom, and will continue to do so in Part 3.
((and...you demonstrated topping from the bottom, or tried to, with LCP on a couch? SOUNDS KINKY.))
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting. We're SO glad you enjoyed it. We're absolutely crazy about Musashi and Hiruma and are so thrilled to make E21 and Mushiruma fans happy with our writing.
Thank you, again. The comment is appreciated more than you know!
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