Bruce Wayne x Harvey Dent // Drabble-fic

[the_gogos]

Title: Beyond These Walls, No One Knows
What: "Do It In Six" drabble-fic, where each sentence, thought, or action is 6 words long.
Authors: gogochan &gogodgene
Fandom:  Batman (The Dark Knight)
Characters:  Bruce Wayne x Harvey Dent
Rating:  Poetic R? Light NC-17? You decide.
Warnings:  Slash, yaoi, m/m, mature and sexual situations
Summary:  Attraction, flirting, banter

Comments

[brushed_velvet]

Whoo, this is hot! I like the structure of it too with it all being in six worded sentences and yet it flowed really well.

Totally with you on the looks they shared in the restaurant. And then the fundraiser later. *fans self* Hmmm, I hope you'll both write more of this hot pairing.

[the_gogos]

Ooooh. Love your icon!! Bale/Bruce is just sooo handsome.

Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to respond. We just started playing with the 6 word drabbles at morlockiness's 6 Word Drabble-Fest, and the ficlet evolved from there.

We absolutely adore Bruce/Harvey/Batman/Two-Face, and are in the process of writing more. We love how slashy Bruce/Harvey/Batman/Two-Face are in the comics and were so thrilled to see bright and shiny evidence of the intimate relationship between "Bats" and "Harv" in TDK. Kudos to Nolan and the actors for that~

Again, thank you so much for reading and replying!!

[gogodgene]

Thank you! We were also surprised how well this turned out, considering we were only allowed six-worded sentences. Somehow we managed to mold something really great out of something really simple.

[rekindle956]

Thank you so much for taking the time to compile and crosspost. This is too good. The dynamics, how it seems you two share a brain and it punctures six words at the time.

There's this new community called nolanverse_fic only for fic and drabbles and just starting. Also the affiliate to brucelovesharv: star_xd_knights.

Thank you both again. This is most wonderful.

[gogo_ergo_sum]

Thank you for commenting, especially because we know you've already read these. <3

gogo & gogod do, at times, share a brain. People who don't know us often think we're the same person. We did enjoy writing this and will be writing more Bruce/Harvey as well as Batman/Two Face. We really appreciate your kind words, as well as the fact that you've pimped out our writing!! Thank you, so very much.

There seem to be a ton of Batman-related comms and we hate to jam up people's f-lists too much, so not sure how much more we'll x-post. But thank you for the recommendations!

[rekindle956]

:)

[lenija]

Woah. How did you do this? You made something beautiful (and occasionally very funny :)) out of this 6-word-challenge-thing. The structure actually fits the Dark Knight/White Knight-theme, with the alternating points of view. And, oh, Two knights in Lady Gotham's service, what a perfect image. *sigh*

[gogo_ergo_sum]

THANK YOU SO MUCH for reading and commenting. We just adore Bruce x Harvey and Batman x Two Face and were in the midst of writing some Bruce x Harvey "first time" fic when the Batman Drabble-Fest came along. And then we just started playing around the drabbles... It really was a ton of fun.

Thank you so very much for your thoughtful comment. Saying that these 6 Word Drabbles turned out beautiful and occasionally funny is honestly the best compliment we could ask for. :)

thnx again!!

[gogodgene]

Thanks so much for your comment! At first we were just being cutesy and snarky with Bruce and Harvey, but it obviously evolved into something more. We absolutely love them both to bits, so that might be why we did so well!

[calm_isolation]

Very nice!

I have to say though that...this bit

H:

Drinks or campaigning? Drinks or campaigning?

...I think you know the answer.

===
B:

Somehow, you'll manage to do both.

made me gigglesnort!!

[gogodgene]

Thanks for the comment, Meg! Harvey and Bruce snark is just such a fun thing. We're glad you could enjoy!

[gogo_ergo_sum]

Fabulous!

There is so much canon snarkage between Bruce and Harvey and Batman & Harvey (and then Batman and Two-Face) in the comics and then echoed soooooo nicely in The Dark Knight. Gives us so much fun material to work with!

Thank you so much for reading, Megs! Very glad you enjoyed. We're writing longer (steeeeamier) fic for them, which probably won't be posted for a little while, as we tend to make our fics loooong. Which is partly why these drabbles were SO fun.

Thanks again for reading and commenting!

[simply_day]

The way this is written is certainly different, but I really liked it. It flows very, very well. I loved the bits of humor you threw in there, and I really loved the steamy parts. It must be hard making all of your sentences six words long, but the way you two have written this - it's so smooth that I wouldn't have noticed the pattern had I not known about it.

[gogodgene]

Thanks, Day! Actually, once you get into the flow of things, coming up with sentences that are only six words long becomes second nature. Gogo was so good with this when she invited me to play. At first, it was take me ten minutes to come up with something good.

So glad you enjoyed.

[gogo_ergo_sum]

Thank you, Day!

Sorry it took gogo so long to respond to this!

Soooo very glad you liked it! We had so much fun with this. Really. It was more like a game than like writing. And we're very happy with the steamy bits! They turned out prettier and more evocative than anything we've ever written. Almost...poetic.

But, anyway...thank you again for taking the time to read and comment. Comments are always appreciated!