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lapetite_kiki January 9 2006, 23:55:20 UTC
Oh, I enjoy this very much!

I will be waiting for the next part! :-)

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allzugern January 10 2006, 15:27:09 UTC
YAY! I'm glad you are enjoying the fic!

Thanks so much for letting me know you like it :-)

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littlethyme January 10 2006, 09:49:56 UTC
"Human Bites" are one of the worst sort of injuries you can have. Nasty, nasty infections.
So alien love bites? Me thinks 1) claiming ritual - likely, 2) venom - not so likely, 3) my favorite - Clark has preprogrammed nanocytes that are currently infiltrating Lex's blood stream causing local inflammation and are reprogramming his DNA to be more Kryptonian so Clark wont be alone. Krytonians don't need to rely on male-female for offspring (that's what the strange dark corner of the ship is for ;-)

On further thinking 5) Lex is just very tasty. ;-)

I am enjoying this very well thought out, well written story. Yeah AlienClark cause Clark IS a super alien not a super 'man'.

As a total aside the word 'Kryptonian's' has the suggestion of 'cretin's' in the spell checker. How funny.

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allzugern January 10 2006, 15:36:55 UTC
*cracks up laughing*

You have really given the possibilities some thought! SV is such a great fandom to write because there are just sooo many possibilities when dealing with an alien. Kind of like magic in HP. Anything is possible. Well almost anything.

I can only guarantee you that 1) Lex is tasty and 2) he will not be having Clarks bebbies.

Thanks so much for the informative and kind feedback, I really apprecaite your comments :-))

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allzugern January 12 2006, 06:00:42 UTC
I have actually been bitten (it took fucking forever to heal) so I knew first hand what I was putting Lex through.

Still, Clark isn't human and you know it may not be just a bite *teases you*

Anyway, Lex doesn't know Clark isn't human so he did the disinfection thing. I'm afraid his healing skillz aren't going to be much of a help in this case, though . *nods knowingly*

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lastscorpion January 28 2006, 05:00:54 UTC
What a terrific Alien!Clark story! I'm really enjoying it, especially the way you're doing all the characters.

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allzugern January 28 2006, 10:23:09 UTC
Thanks so much!

I am especially pleased to hear that the character voices are working. There are so many different ways to play them, it's tough to decide sometimes :-)

This is the last chapter and the first chapter of the sequel 'Jumping Over Shadows' went out to final beta last night. It should be up in a few days.

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