And Even More Poems...

Apr 20, 2005 17:35

This Dusty Face ( Read more... )

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thetaguitar April 22 2005, 02:44:36 UTC
Both are very good. Could use one/both for "Ex"-type songs, perhaps...

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almightyjuh April 22 2005, 06:41:36 UTC
thank you... i don't really want to use them as songs though... just my feelings... and these are seperate poems... but upon reading them they could be one... just that the little boy in a coat doesn't really fit in... unless you look at it like it's the boy inside me or something... which is kind of cool... like the coat is my false sense of reality... damn... that makes me sounds deep...

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hey chicke84 April 23 2005, 20:34:34 UTC
Hey....no ex songs Colin i hate when i hear songs on the radio about ex girlfriends/boyfriends...very pathetic sounding.(not implying anything watsoever).just write songs about what you have in your life and what you hope to have in the future..don't dwell on the past. (A lil help w/possible song topics maybe?)Hope we'll still keep in touch..but by that poem sounds like we wont..

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Re: hey almightyjuh April 24 2005, 06:15:33 UTC
it's actually quite vain to think that these poems are about you amanda... and if you read my previous comment you'd notice that they aren't going to be songs... and most of our music revolves around past relationships... that's where the heart of our music takes us... so don't presume that these poems are about you... and it might be easier for you to make comments like that considering you are in a relationship...

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Re: hey hagen13 April 24 2005, 09:31:07 UTC
who said anything about ex"girlfriends"?

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Re: hey chicke84 April 24 2005, 16:54:15 UTC
...may be vain but true

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