For All the Boys....DONE!!

[almond_joyz]

It's taken me longer than expected, but I did finish the little story about Ginny and the boys in her life for aggiebell90.

--Neville
--Michael
--Dean
--Harry
--Neville, Pt. 2

And now...Harry: Forever

( Ginny loved moments like this, when the two of them forgot about everything but each other )

Comments

[aggiebell90]

Grrr. I had a comment all done and LJ ate it.

You are made of awesome and win, and I can't thank you enough for doing this for me, Deena. ♥

I can just picture all of these scenes in my mind; I wish I had any sort of artistic talent at all, because I want to draw them all.

I love the contrast between this one and Harry #1, how they were still so very awkward and hesitant in the earlier one and are so much more comfortable with their bodies and each other in this one. And the idea of Molly catching them makes me giggle like a mad woman, if only because I keep trying to picture what my reaction would be if I walked in on one of my kids. :)

Thank you, thank you, thank you!

[almond_joyz]

You're welcome!! I can also picture these in my head and to have someone say they get a clear picture in their head is nice to hear--makes me feel worthwhile as a writer.

Dang...now you make me want to draw!!

[ladywhizbee]

Oh, I just read this in one sweep. So lovely. I enjoyed each boy thoroughly. I particularly enjoyed--actually, no--I really enjoyed ALL of them. I loved seeing how they were all so different and how Ginny responded to each. Neville and Harry are my favorites, though Dean is right up there (I love how you wrote him) and I love the innocence of the Michael one--first boyfriend and uncertainty of her choice, etc. It felt so real.

Anyway, I'm rambling!

Really nicely done and soooo refreshing. :-)

[almond_joyz]

Why thank you so much!! I appreciate it that you read and wrote down your thoughts and what you liked.