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eyeliner (dom/elijah, w/ anatsuno, porn)

Jul 17, 2006 17:00

Title: Eyeliner
Pairing: Dom/Elijah
Authors: almostnever and anatsuno
Rating: Crossdressing porn
Notes: Each section is 14 words long. For absolutefiction's 14 words crossdressing challenge, helped along by bunniewabbit posting about Elijah in eyeliner.

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( Elijah always got his way when he wore eyeliner. )

elijah, trip me as i speak, dom/elijah

Comments 16

lisabellex July 18 2006, 00:27:28 UTC

Gah... the last four sections totally killed me dead.

Hot, girls. Very hot.

:D

almostnever July 18 2006, 00:30:04 UTC

Thanks! :-)

ex_absolutef238 July 18 2006, 01:12:53 UTC

it was so hard not to comment on every single line. this is just sizzling and raunchy and guh.

you both win! \o/

almostnever July 18 2006, 01:13:53 UTC

Everybody wins, because there is MORE PORN! :D

ex_absolutef238 July 18 2006, 01:15:58 UTC

after, i typed that i realized it may appear that i am saying you win the 14 line challenge. but i didn't! there's so many great ones. i just meant in general. you know! you win at porn, yippi! we all win! \o/

ex_absolutef238 July 18 2006, 01:14:43 UTC

p.s. i love sweat made his balls sticky.

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bunniewabbit July 18 2006, 02:58:46 UTC

Oh, golly. Eyeliner should happen much more often.

"You wanna get me back?" Elijah whispered. "Shove me down, fuck my mouth? C'mon."

Oh, golly.

almostnever July 18 2006, 12:31:08 UTC

Eyeliner should happen much more often.

Yes, yes, it should.

verangel July 18 2006, 03:36:05 UTC

Holy F! that was HOT! Talk about to the point!!! I am kinda breathless. really! :)

almostnever July 18 2006, 12:31:34 UTC

Thank you!

westmoon July 18 2006, 15:08:35 UTC

Nnnngggggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhh.

Not eloquent, I know, but it's how I'm feeling right now. :)

almostnever July 18 2006, 17:19:51 UTC

:-)