focus 2/3 (lotrips au, dom/elijah)

Jan 15, 2007 04:07

Title: Focus (2/3. Part one hereFandom: Lotrips (AU ( Read more... )

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anatsuno January 15 2007, 13:47:02 UTC
It's priceless. Seriously, so many knock-out visions! Dom's voice! Kitty!

Couple of weeks ago, Harry was snapping Hugo done up as a drag dominatrix, they were using a dungeon in somebody's basement.

OH YEAH.

Kitty pulls off the paper shroud that was pinned around his neck, and fuck if he's not naked to the waist and half in the costume-- such as it is. He's only wearing the vinyl shorts, molded indecently to his tight little arse. His chest is smooth and narrow, decorated with small pink nipples, like little sugar candies. Despite the cosmetics, the gloss, the gel and the general air of perfection, Kitty looks positively edible to Dom, who really ought to have lost interest completely by now.See, I could quote the whole thing back at you, or I could extract all the mouth-watering descriptions, or, like this, I can be reasonable and settle for one, because, well. I love that things which would have other readers object in other fics (little sugar candies! almost wtf-y!) are so perfect when you write them, blending into the voice ( ... )

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almostnever January 15 2007, 14:17:40 UTC
Wow, overwhelming. I'm thrilled you like it so much. ♥

Thank you!

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anatsuno January 15 2007, 14:27:34 UTC
I love all of yours that much, I think - playing faves with your lotrips fics is always hard on me, though of course when pressed I can make a list. I made myself quote back and FB at length because I thought you'd read enough "yay" from me, and that even though you probably know "yay" means OMGLOVEITISSOGOOD, you deserve to know why and how and like, I wanted the feedback to actually register and mean something and all. So. But I could do this on all your fics, if i wasn't so lazy! (sorry, I am.)

<33

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laeliacatt January 15 2007, 14:27:31 UTC
I can't say enough about this. I love all of it and want to take it home with me. :) *carefully pets Kitty so as avoid mussing his makeup - Liv would kill me!*

Daisy & Andy, Noble and Princess, pregnant Liv, Hugo and his perforated wig (bwahaha!) and I could go on and on.

But I just <3 Dom in this so much. When he worries that Cate might be "trifling with his camera" I had to laugh. I've been around too many photographers who were absolutely paranoid about their stuff. Perfect. I also <3 Rupert. He's a 'sherpa' of the best order! :)

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almostnever January 15 2007, 14:58:12 UTC
You were such a big help, and it's such a relief to have someone who knows the topic look things over! Thank you again! I'm so glad you like it.

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aprilkat January 15 2007, 15:05:34 UTC
This is so fantastic! I hope you are able to take us to the next chapter soon, because I am dying to see how Dom copes with everything, not least of all his enthrallment with Kitty!

And need I tell you how flabbergasting the very idea of Elijah as this model is? *fans self*

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almostnever January 16 2007, 01:33:32 UTC
And need I tell you how flabbergasting the very idea of Elijah as this model is?

I'm glad I'm not the only one who thinks so! I may have considered commissioning fanart of Elijah in Kitty's costume at one point... *whistles innocently*

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oneangrykate January 15 2007, 15:47:30 UTC
Oh, heart. Your dialogue still wins me over every time. The researchy details are fun without being overwhelming, and Dom's inner voice here is ace.

Okay, so I lost my shit during the boots argument. What a lovely thing to wake up to.

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almostnever January 16 2007, 01:36:37 UTC
I'm always happy hearing that you like something. ♥

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sophinisba January 15 2007, 16:44:52 UTC
Oh, I really love this! Anatsuno is right that one could quote the whole thing back at you. Every paragraph is sexy and funny and the writing is just fantastic. It's easy to understand Dom's crush, of course, just based on how Kitty looks, but I also loved the details of his snorting and snarking while still being all professional and not moving or getting in the way of other people's work. Being nice to the dog omg! And above all the part where he sees how gorgeous he looks in the mirror and takes the opportunity to praise someone else: "That's amazing. You did a fantastic job. Thank you." That is just perfect.

And yay, there will be more!!

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almostnever January 16 2007, 01:39:47 UTC
I'm glad it's coming across that Kitty is more than just a pretty face in this. :D Thank you!

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