Comments | almoststories: an unexpected governess, part 4 (dom/elijah, lotrips au)

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an unexpected governess, part 4 (dom/elijah, lotrips au)

Apr 04, 2006 03:21

Title: An Unexpected Governess
Fandom: Lotrips AU
Pairing: Dominic/Elijah
Ratings/Warnings: Crossdressing. Finally Dominic shows up! So late. He really is troublesome!
Notes: Concept by oneangrykate, here.

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( Once Lord Sean began to make a habit of seeking me out, it behooved me to find other ways to traverse the estate... )

lotrips, lotrips au, governess wip, dom/elijah

Comments 48

jubilancy April 4 2006, 15:23:01 UTC

Oh lord, almighty, this is grand.

almostnever April 6 2006, 23:47:59 UTC

Glad you're enjoying it!

willsomeonecare April 4 2006, 15:47:10 UTC

I can't wait for them to have a further confrontation and Dom find out that Miss Wood is actually Mister Wood.

Very wonderful chapter.

almostnever April 6 2006, 23:48:16 UTC

Thanks!

ladysunrope April 4 2006, 16:42:40 UTC

I do like the way you put slightly comic moments in the chapter -I can imagine Dom's expression as he sees 'Miss Wood' catch the ball so expertly and visualise the way Elijah tries to stop himself matching Dom's stride across the grounds. These and the wonderful dialogue make this such a pleasure.

almostnever April 6 2006, 23:48:36 UTC

Thank you!

lisabellex April 4 2006, 17:15:14 UTC

Ooh!

*is gleeful*

I love Dom's part in this.

And poor Elijah's so self-conscious under Dom's rakish scrutiny.

This is such a treat.

:D

almostnever April 6 2006, 23:49:40 UTC

It's fun to write, poor corsetted bound-up Elijah bedeviled by free and easy Dominic...

dragovianknight April 4 2006, 17:52:05 UTC

Oh my god oh my god OHMYGOD! ::bounces and makes high-pitched squeeing sounds:: It keeps reaching new levels of greatness!

♥ Dom.

almostnever April 6 2006, 23:50:03 UTC

I'm glad you're enjoying it!