28 meme: 6, horny dom

[almostnever]

6. Horny Dom.

Nothing ever changes
for telesilla
Dom/Orlando

*

Orlando's shirt flutters open in the breeze, and Dom catches a groan, stillborn in his throat.

Comments

[rodneyscat]

Ah, for me this is more about craving tactility than about being horny, but I love the imagery; Orlando stretching and expanding, and Dom holding back and drawing in.

[almostnever]

Thank you! I didn't really intend it to be so angsty and yearning, but that's improv for you.

[anatsuno]

it's seriously painful, the thickness of his yearning; it takes talent to write it so efficiently, hurty and calmly beautiful together. *impressed like usual, but still, dude*

[almostnever]

I know, I know, no angst for you! :-)

[feelforfaith]

I want to say something smart, but as I'm reading it for the second time, all I can think of are the images it evokes in my head and Dom's want and his ache that are so palpable. Beautiful.

[almostnever]

Thank you!