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[almostzero]

We partnered
And I loved her like
I have cracked nuts.
Crushing wooden grains
Wound so long, so tight
Looking for her heart
Like something I would eat.

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[thepitcasualty]

I feel this. You think she's beautiful

[almostzero]

yeah. it's about wanting someone inside and out, and how the only way to do that is sort of a crushing, hard opening-up. cracking nuts was the best image i could come up with.

but i am currently searching for others..........if you have an idea!!!

[thepitcasualty]

I loved him like
I have tended to fresh wounds.
Trembling fingertips laced
Through soft paper skin
Searching for small pieces
Still missing and raw

[kidsinsuits]

hard pushed and smoking,
i loved you like the burnt ends of
your pocketbook matches:
my lingering smell,
your blistering fingers.
we remind each other of our presence
before the wet pinch hisses
and it all goes out.