Untitled Poem

[alohalife]

 It's been a while since the last time I wrote a poem. This one is my first (long) poem writen in English so, if you read it, let me know if you liked it or not.

Untitled poem

The darkness of night

The heat of fire

Two meaningless rhymes

A kiss proved the liar.

My heart got shuttered a thousand times

That’s why now I’m writing these rhymes.

In the light

Comments

[luvthe_gazette]

I hate it when there's no 'like' button... -___-

[alohalife]

I'm glad you liked it!!! *hugs*

[luvthe_gazette]

*hugs back*

[alohalife]

*is suffocated*

[deprivation666]

I am happy that you wrote me about this account of yours.

This is moving. I could say that some things could be understand differenty by different people.
This one is really good.
<3
Thank you for the share <3

[alohalife]

I'm glad you liked my poem! *hugs*
You know, when I started writting it, it was supposed to be just 4 to 6 lines long but then I couldn't stop writing it. I'm not sure if I wanted it to have a special meaning though, that's why it's still untitled...
As for the fact that it some things can be understood in different ways, well, I'm not sure whether that's good or bad but, thinkind of the last poem we analysed at school, I guess that that happens with many poems. *smiles*