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[seventines]

Hello folks,

I'm new here. Thanks to starrysummer for allowing me to join. In celebration, I've written a little fic, if you like it please let me know and I'll write more.

Title: Gentille alouette
Author: seventines aka stendahlRating: (G-NC17) NC17

Comments

[starrysummer]

Ooo, that's just fantastic!

I've never seen anyone use the laundry room before, and I love it. Everything flows so smoothly, and the sexual encounter between them is very, very hot. The ending is very touching, as well. You do a great job of showing Marietta's point of view.

[seventines]

Thank you, that's really lovely feedback! Yes, I got into a bit of a dream about unexplored parts of Hogwarts. Must see if I can think of any more...

[sajee]

Ok... I just stumbled upon this community and decided to avoid work for a little bit longer by reading your fic which was just awesome.
Quite seriously, it was a great premise and really well written. I think I'm in love with your Pansy - for a number of reasons but particularly: “You can sit with me and my friends. We’re all used to being called sneaks.”
What a killer closing line! Great work.

[seventines]

Thanks! Always glad to promote work avoidance in others (after all, how else would fics get written?).

I'm pleased you liked Pansy - I like to think she's a bit less two-dimensional than she seems in canon..

Sorry to reply so late - been on hols. Back to avoiding working now though.

[ex_theatrica309]

<33333333!

I was just directed here by starrysummer and I can't believe the pairing. (I'm a fan of both Cho/Pansy and Cho/Marietta, but I'd never even considered Pansy/Marietta before--it makes so much sense, though, and it's so hot!)

It was wonderful to see a nice Pansy--most fic portrays her as very cold and manipulative, and I was glad to see her more supportive side called into focus.

The only clear thought in Marietta’s mind was that after four years, she was finally exactly where she wanted to be but with the wrong girl.

This line? Brilliant. :)

The sex was very well done, and setting it in the laundry room was a stroke of genius. Thanks for sharing such a great fic! :D

[seventines]

Thanks for your comments.. I was just reading GoF one day and something about a description of Cho sparked off an image of black hair - I have to admit it chimed with the film Pansy rather than book Pansy, but there you go.

Anyway, Pansy, I'm quite sure, has layers and I'm really pleased you think I showed that.

Oh, and I'm just delighted about the er, hotness. Always hard to tell when writing ;-)

[anonymous]

Love it, love it, love it! Well done and still hot, even after seven years! :)