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alone_dreaming

Ficlet: White Collar

May 24, 2010 08:47

Title: By S. Morgenstern
Author: Alone Dreaming
Rating: PG
Characters: Neal Caffrey, Peter Burke
Warnings: Extreme spoilers for Out of the Box (Season One Finale)
Words: A little under 500

( Gently )

challenge: princess bride, fic: by s. morgenstern, fic: white collar

Comments 4

ursula4x May 24 2010, 14:53:53 UTC

This frames the finale perfectly. Neal's introspective worked very well and then the last few lines were touching.

alone_dreaming May 25 2010, 01:10:34 UTC

Thanks. :) Was aiming for something of the sort.

daria234 May 25 2010, 03:45:44 UTC

I like the way you describe Peter's logic - his sense of solid reality that can't be moved by Neal's Dreamworld sense of things. I also like that you focus on how gentle Peter and Neal are with each other, since neither are in gentle fields.

leesa_perrie August 2 2012, 14:57:05 UTC

Perfect!