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alone_dreaming

Fic: Sherlock (BBC)

Aug 29, 2010 20:33

Cab Ride ConversationsBy Alone Dreaming
Rating: PG-13 (mild, for a bit of language and blood; you know, my norm)
Characters: Sherlock, John, Sarah, Mrs. Hudson (is mentioned)
Warnings: Spoilers for “The Blind Banker” and a bit of senseless whump.
Words: 2,300
Author’s Note: Um, because he was knocked out which generally goes hand in hand with a ( Read more... )

fic: sherlock bbc, fic

Comments 22

kaitou1412 August 30 2010, 01:24:34 UTC

It's probably a sign that I'm a terrible person, but I DO love John-whump so much. And this is well done, especially the Afghanistan flashback and the fact that Sherlock doesn't quite know what to do (but isn't reduced to a panicked wreck either).

Thanks for writing!

alone_dreaming August 30 2010, 13:15:46 UTC

>_> I'll join the terrible person club with you. I'm addicted to John whump in all forms, all categories, everything.

kaitou1412 August 30 2010, 13:27:03 UTC

Oh. My. God.

That's the best mental image ever. Mind if I steal it for an icon?

alone_dreaming August 30 2010, 14:12:12 UTC

Hah. :D Please do. Send me a link so I can use it? XD With proper credit and all.

rabidsamfan August 30 2010, 01:27:56 UTC

Oh, poor John! To get interrogated by Sherlock Holmes every two hours, and with a headache too!

And you know he's going to get woken up straight away, because he didn't answer. (I quite agree with you about the concussion, btw.)

Lovely. Well done!

alone_dreaming August 30 2010, 13:17:52 UTC

I think that may be some sort of hell. And no doubt, he won't ask the normal questions like, "Who's the Prime Minister" and "What year is it" because he's Sherlock Holmes and he doesn't really know those answers...

Yep, soon as Sherlock comes back to the present, it's round one. :) Followed by, I'm sure, three or four others until John gets cranky and grouches, and Sherlock, recognizing normal behavior, thinks he's probably okay.

njelruch August 30 2010, 02:43:48 UTC

Oh, this is gorgeous. I really like to think that something like this did happen that night.

alone_dreaming August 30 2010, 13:19:11 UTC

Heh. :) Thanks. I just divined it by Sherlock standing with him at the kitchen table pouring his own tea. For a man who's infinitely lazy (both when he's focused and when he's bored), he appeared quite productive. There had to be a reason...

niennahirilfea August 30 2010, 03:26:11 UTC

I really love this :) I hope you write more of these two. (No, you don't know me, I followed a link from somewhere :) Hope you don't mind.)

alone_dreaming August 30 2010, 13:20:24 UTC

:) I don't mind even remotely. I'm glad you found it and you enjoyed it! This is story number four, with another in the works, so you'll see more, no worries.

random_nexus August 30 2010, 05:09:15 UTC

Awww, Poor John! *pats gently*
You did this very well. I enjoyed it and the characterizations a great deal.

You have several oddball glitches that look like copy/paste oopsies, or things you meant to delete didn't, which distracted me. So, while not an 'evisceration', per se, it is concrit.

Spiffing ficcery, you.

alone_dreaming August 30 2010, 13:23:34 UTC

Yes, poor John. Definitely poor John. :)

Thank you SO much for mentioning glitches. I read what you wrote and thought, "I'd best look into that" but went on to the rest of my email. By my second message, I chose to go and look and was so glad I did. Seriously, I accept constructive criticism with absolute happiness. It's much better hearing early on then going back and reading it myself sometime later and feeling like a dummy.

:) And I'm glad you liked it despite the glitches. :)