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alone_dreaming

Fic: Sherlock (BBC)

Oct 07, 2010 11:02

Title: The Game Marches On
Author: Alone Dreaming
Rating: PGish (aka, TV-12 or something, nothing that wouldn't happen on the show)
Characters: John, Sherlock
Warnings: Spoilers for Sherlock 1x03, as this could stand to be a tag to The Great Game. Oh, an unbeta'd, unbritpicked, unmedicalpicked beyond my own limited knowledge of everything
Words: 1600 ( ( Read more... )

fic: sherlock bbc, fic

Comments 24

random_nexus October 8 2010, 01:25:49 UTC

I'm guessing the beep is the last "pip" from Moriarty? (sorry, it's been a long day, I'm slow)

I enjoyed this VERY much. The descriptions and John's thoughts, all of it. Good job!

alone_dreaming October 8 2010, 03:04:56 UTC

:) I suppose so. Jim won't tell me. He just keeps giggling.

Am so glad you enjoyed it.

tardis_stowaway October 8 2010, 07:15:16 UTC

Eeeeeeee! That was intense. Poor John. Sherlock is justifiably so desperate.

That ending was evil, but perfect.

alone_dreaming October 8 2010, 13:57:46 UTC

I feel that poor, poor John got the short end of the stick in that episode.

And my true, evil colors have shown. :D I couldn't help myself. One part of me wanted to cart them off to the hospital and have Lestrade report that they found Moriarty's body. The other part of me said, completely accurately, that Jim's too clever for that and there never was that last pip... was there?

bligyn October 8 2010, 20:27:10 UTC

I am a silly fool without either the brains of Watson or Holmes, what was the beep about?

And awesome story :)

alone_dreaming October 12 2010, 02:11:45 UTC

You are hardly a silly fool. It was meant to be Moriarty's last pip as I do not believe we had one at the end of the episode.

:) Glad you enjoyed it.

adidaspie October 14 2010, 01:56:38 UTC

I think I'm getting used to your brilliancy. I'm able to form somewhat articulate comments now instead of blubbering in amazement. But perhaps that's because I wait a while to actually write the comment after reading the story.

That was really intense. The biggest thing that I noticed is that it's always IC. Always. You put them in all sorts of situations and manage to keep both of them and everyone else in character all the time. Kudos.

Whoa, you can use italics here. But...how? And you can pick which icon to display? Oh...that explains a LOT...whoa...*is amazed*.