Loved the whole hot "physics nerd" turned on by 'cantilevered' bit. But then maybe I loved 'physics nerd Ryan' last season because I took so many science classes in HS and college. : )
z, i'm in science too! i guess i could be safely accused to living vicariously through my writing. it's scary how we have so many similarities: city, knitting, science, and of course the OC. thanks for the kind review.
Ok, that was awesomely awesome. So. Much. Better. than the actual epi. The "hot" fire girl. The sexy engineering talk. Pony puns and bulging things and such.
They stayed inside the Trojan horse, enjoying each other’s company, until dusk and it became a worry Marissa might set fire to them. And damn, that would so be AtWOOD luck.
Very nice, alopecia. I liked the whole explanation of Ryan being the Phoenix to explain how he was trying to change. And of course, the hot! I can't believe you let your husband beta for you!
thanks! as for mr. alopecia beta-ing... well, we've been together for more than a decade and he was teasing me about spending so much time writing nonsense - he doesn't have the OC love, sad to say. and i should write "something interesting" i.e. smut. making him beta was my payback. heehee.
This was a hoot. I had to keep reminding myself that some of it was tongue-in-cheek as I'd get into the heavy meaning. He can put out my fire anytime! (nice job on first-time smut too)
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They stayed inside the Trojan horse, enjoying each other’s company, until dusk and it became a worry Marissa might set fire to them. And damn, that would so be AtWOOD luck.
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