Fic - It Was That Day - for hp_art_tales - [H/D, R]

[alovelycupoftea]

Title: It Was That Day.
Author: alovelycupoftea
Summary: A kiss is just a kiss?
Rating: R
Warnings: Language
Featured Characters/Pairings: Harry/Draco
Word Count: ~2000
Inspiration Art: It Was That Day, by stellamoon
Author's Notes: Stella, I had such a wonderful time talking over what this art meant to you and trying to write the words that capture the feeling and the

Comments

[fancypantsdylan]

Oh that was just beautiful and I'm of the opinion kissing is so much for intimate than anything else you can do that this really got to me.

Just wonderful darling :)

[alovelycupoftea]

Thank you! I think you are absolutely right about kissing, and Stella's kiss in the picture is so beautiful that I knew I wanted that to be one of the themes running through it!

Thank you.

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[alovelycupoftea]

Thank you so much. I am so pleased you liked it!

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[mayfly_78]

Impressive and powerful and touching. That was lovely! Short sharp sentences that suck you in.

[alovelycupoftea]

Thank you so much. It was a bit of an experiment in style, so I am pleased it worked for you!

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[lokifan]

This was fantastic and heart-wrenching to read. I loved the format - it really added to that sense of time stretching out. Poor poor Draco - his neurotic fear about the jumper losing its smell, and this whole paragraph -

Maybe he had been doing it wrong. Maybe all their kisses had had meanings, and he’d just never picked up on them. Maybe if he had been better at whatever they’d been doing was, then he would have got those messages and he would have known and he would have known that he had known and he wouldn’t be in this position of not knowing and probably never seeing him again.

- brought tears to my eyes.

[alovelycupoftea]

Thank you so much. I am so pleased it made you feel like that - I really wanted to get into writing the feeling I get from looking at Stella's art, so I am so pleased it did that for you.

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[paper_moonshine]

This was really excellent! A great complement to the lovely artwork

[alovelycupoftea]

Thank you so much. I am so pleased you think it works with the art - Stella's art is so beautiful!

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