A ficcy...

[aloyshastar]

That I wholly blame on the new comic and my own pessimistic mind.

Bulletproof Skin

I don’t own Young Avengers. Except issue 10...

Author: Aloysha

Rating: *shrugs* I’d say PG-13 for this part. If I actually decide to write more…we’ll see.

Pairings: Teddy/Billy.

Summery: Billy and Tommy are revealed to be William and Thomas Maximoff and fearing

Comments

[bebopbeats]

OMG angst! This is very pretty and lovable.

*two thumbs up*

[aloyshastar]

Yeah...the angst. Heh. Thanks.

[fullmetal_cute]

Hm. It's nice, but it could use a go-over from a beta reader. I would be happy to see more along this line, should you feel like writing them. Nice job.

[aloyshastar]

Yeah...my editing skills? Not so hot but, alas, I have a bad history with beta readers...still, I suppose its time I go hunting for another one.

I'm pretty sure there will be more. Then again I'm also sure if I promise it there is no way it'll happen.

[fullmetal_cute]

I volunteer my services. I have a BA in English, and I've done it before for other people.

[aloyshastar]

Well then...you're hired. :) I just have to warn you in advance i have the attention span of a brain damaged gnat and may, at times, need to be nagged into action.

you can email me at 'aloyshatoolate@yahoo.com' to discuss things if you want.

[kygn]

The angst! It hurts my soul!

But you definately put a lot of work into this. Good job! :)

[aloyshastar]

Not that much work...it would have written easier if I wasn't up talking about #10 until four AM...*coughs*

The angst is supposed to hurt so...thanks. I think.

[rhea_carlysse]

Angst!

I like angst! I love angst! Angsty!fics are love! (hey, now I have a new colorbar!)

This was great, I´d like to read the second part. Please? Fast. Please? *pouts*

Oh, and I haven´t read the new issue yet, but I´m pretty sure I´m not going to like Tommy.

Well, I may like him is he is like Pietro...

[aloyshastar]

Yea, a lot of people are wary of Tommy because he got all 'blowing stuff up' happy for a while there. I say he was justified. But yes, angst is love! How can you have happy without the non-happy?

Or so I tell myself when tormenting characters...

[rhea_carlysse]

Yeah, we need characters suffering so we can give them a happy ending or kill them off

I don´t know, people say they don´t like angst because when they read it´s not to be depressed. I don´t get depressed with angst, torturing characters is funny... ^__^

[clayin]

Aghghahfahahfhsdjkahfk!
Yeah. I don't know if I can be coherent for awhile.
Aafhahfsigle!
*cuddles Billy and Teddy*

[aloyshastar]

Yay! Incoherency! lol...there is nothing better.