Seeing, Chapter 6

[alphateam101]

Title: Seeing

Pairing: Demi/Selena,

Rating: M

Summary: Sometimes you need more your than eyes in order to see what's in front of you.

A/N: For this chapter, I wanted to do my part to introduce Demi's mom in a different way from what I've seen in previous stories. It's kind of experimental for me. Hope you guys like it :)

Disclaimer: Again I don't

Comments

[perhapsds]

I absolutely LOVED the family part, seriously I think you should really use that card from time to time or in every chapter. lol
Awesome chapter. I liked the drama and I'm hoping for more.

[alphateam101]

THat's my favorite part too :). I always liked to portray her parents as both a positive and a negative influence in her life. Thanks again for the continue support ;-)

[ellaayyx3]

The description of what happened to Demi through Dianna's point of view along with Demi's freak out made me realise how tragic the accident was.
The description was great.

[alphateam101]

You haven't heard nothing yet ;-)

[devena]

Oh...! I commented on the topic back there on the community and thought: Er... I should have done that on her journal...!xD

But well I see it now...! I'm KwonAngel from fanfiction...xD Now I see your fic here!xD Sorry about that!

And I still love your fic! And really... I kept reading that part from Demi's accident... That really got me. But just to know... Will you describe it in details whenever Demi will or won't explain it to Selena...? 'Cause I think it would break my heart to just think of it.

Just saying it again... I love the chapter too! It was great!

[alphateam101]

I hope I can lol. I have it all in my head but not sure how it will come out on "paper" per say. Hope it will look good.

[devena]

Oh... But the way you're getting on with this fic, I know it will be great! I mean... For just reading that small part there I could already imagined how it was... I think the way you'll out on the paper will be awesome too!

[classic06]

so, in case i haven't said this yet, i am absolutely in love with this fic. Your writing is great. the angle you took is super original and fresh, and i think you describe both girls and their 'scars' perfectly. definitely can't wait for more!

[alphateam101]

This made my day. The fact that one of my favorite Delena authors came and said this to me is just super fantastical :-D. Now I got some big standards to live up too lol. But that's cool. Gives me more motivation ;-)

Thank you for the continued support and sticking around.

[semi_freak]

i love the connection Demi has w/ her family in this story. her freak out made me tear up, then reading it thru her mums p.o.v. made me actually cry. this story just keeps getting better and better and i absolutely love it. <3