ohmiya....... drabble?

[alphie_damiek]

i hate it when i'm more productive than the internet. D:< also, arashifanatic, i know you asked for 'ohmiya, ohno saving nino' and im kiiiiinda working on that, but this popped up after you gave me the prompt. it doesn't fit it to a T, but please accept it for now, as i have come to the realization that i am horrible at following prompts. ._.

Comments

[bokuwashinigami]

This is an incredibly pretty piece! Very well-written and emotional, and I like the perspective that you chose to present this ficlet with - how it's focused on Nino but through Ohno's observations. You can really feel the bonds of friendship between the two. :)

I love what you've done with the concept from that Nino-Matsuken in LA video, how you've made it into a sort of larger Nino conflict. It's got a lot of depth and it makes for an interesting read. (Not to mention it gets you wondering about what he really thought about the whole thing!)

Hehehe you did such a great job with this; I LOVELOVELOVE you writing!! <3

(HURRAY FOR BEING LJ FRIENDS!)

[alphie_damiek]

i know im already telling you this via aim, but your comment is amazing @_@ im a dumb-butt when it comes to commenting and responding to comments, so let me just end this hot mess by saying thank you so much for an insightful comment.

(AND YAY LJ FRIENDS YAY!)

[bllue]

you know, I mostly agree with grace xD I don't tend to get along with the voice you used, but I like how it's that ohno's noticing the little things no one else did.

T_T how depressing. gah, if the fans had known, they would have been there in droves. this makes me hope that someone told nino that people drove/flew/ran from all over the country just to see him but had to go back home the next day xD

grace made me feel like i had to post something equally coherent T_T but just so you know, making me feel anything while reading is a great accomplishment 8D

[alphie_damiek]

lol dont worry about it, i understand that everyone has their own tastes, and im really appreciative that you took the time to read it. :) and ugh, angst!! whyyy, i don't even like reading angst. XD and dont worry about coherency in your comments, since im horrible at leaving comments.

thank you!

[sharksoul24]

awww since Grace and Astrid gave awesome mine definitely won't as awesome....but I like it and I always love me some good old ohmiya :DDDD

(can't compete with this 2 xDD)

[alphie_damiek]

lol don't worry, its not a contest. i love you for leaving a comment! thank you ♥

[kami_desu]

Now I really am a bad fan :o
not that I would have been able to do something... but I didnt even know that they where walking thought the city in hope someone recognises them? eh...
poor Nino~ at least you have Oh-chan, no worrys, you really have enough fans ^^ and they get more and more everyday!
I like your ficlet ^^ but it was to much angst :(

lol, you really are hopeless in following prompts xD I still wonder how you made out of my prompt bdsm xD

[alphie_damiek]

yeah, i still think it was a stupid 'mission' :<

i know, right? wtf where did that angst come from? i wrote this during my class, so maybe i was just sad to be at school. XDD and indeed, i am really hopeless when it comes to following prompts. i just... maybe i should warn people when i ask for prompts. 'hey! give me a prompt but be warned: i won't follow it! 8D'

[kami_desu]

'hey! give me a prompt but be warned: i won't follow it! 8D'

lol... well then nobody will ever even have the slightes Idea what you make out of the prompt xD I mean, when I get a promt, there is only a limited range of options what could come of it xD but your options are unlimited xD

yeah, it really was a stupid mission -.- but maybe in reality it was not that depressing but just an enjoyable walk around without annoying fangirls? I mean in Tokyo they probably cant walk from a to b unrecognised...

[arashifanatic]

WONDERFUL, JUST AMAZING AND BEAUTIFULLY WONDERFUL ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥♥♥♥

your writing is so amazing and you did an awesome job. i'm telling you, you would make an awesome writer!!!!

[alphie_damiek]

aww thank you so much! however, i noticed that my last two fics both started with "the first ______ he ______s" x_x ugggh!!

[arashifanatic]

haha maybe that can be like your signature writing style xDD

[alphie_damiek]

hahahah if that were the case, i would never be able to enter a fic exchange/contest XDD