[fic] Mommy

[alprax]

Inspired by one of my absolute favorite scenes from Milo and Otis. If you haven't seen the film, I highly recommend it as it was a staple of my childhood.

Title: Mommy (for lack of a better title)
Rating: G? (PG-13ish for language?)
Word Count: ~1,800
Warnings: Fluff, crack
Summary: When Fay finds himself acting as nanny to an egg, Kurogane is forced to

Comments

[youkohiei_fan]

xDD This is far too cute. I especially enjoyed Kurogane's tough love at the end.

[alprax]

Aww, thank you. :)

[uakari120]

LOLOLOL.

Is it wrong that I was kind of hoping for a mini-bird-sized sword to appear somewhere in here? Kurogane totally could have sent the little guy after Fay's ankles XDDD Or after Mokona....man, Kurogane needs a tiny, cute, unimpeachable accolyte...

This was so adorable. Kuro-mommy is a terrible role model!

[alprax]

Oh god, that would have been great! He really is outnumbered in the group, isn`t he? Poor guy. If only he weren`t such a sourpuss....

Thank you. :)

[youkohiei_fan]

lol I must resist drawing a baby bird with a scowl, a headband, and a tiny sword in its beak...

[uakari120]

DO THIS THING YOU KNOW YOU WANT TO!

[zelinxia]

Dawww, that was awfully cute! I love how persistent the baby bird was calling the man its mommy and then he tries to teach it to be tough.

Pffft, Fai's logic at the end was win. I can imagine this.

"I thought I said no more kids, mage!" Kurogane roared.
"Eh, but Kuro-mommy, I thought you meant kids as in goat kids," Fai said slyly.
"You're just using that as a scapegoat!" the ninja fumed.
"Was that a pun I caught?"

*shot*

[alprax]

Oh, dear lord. I have a feeling that Fai would adopt so many creatures of questionable origin just to torment poor Kuro-pii.

Thank you, and thank you again. :)