Amazing update! The cliffhanger about killed me. Lov that Natalia used that stuborness to save Olivia (great how u captured that nobleness of spirt that leads to unnecessary suffering-so frustrating). Going to be complicated moving forward, if Olivia survives the infection, given all the two have to overcome (just trusting each other let alone the girl thing). Also thank you for Reva. Always liked her and josh. Nice u saved someone with as strong a personality as Olivia a little revenge and some connection to who she was before zombieness. Ill stop babbling. Can't wait for next update. Thanks again for the fix. :)
I'm so glad that Natalia stopped Olivia and pulled her back into the house and knocked some sense into her. I understand that things might get worse before they get better, but I really do hope that it won't be too bad. They've already faced so much, and are bound to face more.
The end of the chapter, about Reva and how she knew the 'thing' in her arms as well as the form lagging behind her are somehow important was a different take. A good one. One that made me laugh as I realized WHAT she was eating. Lol. Great chapter! Always look forward to seeing an update. Thank you for writing and sharing this story!
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Get in the SUV and get the hell out of town!
I gotta go look at that poster of Afterworld again!
Glad to see a update~!
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Also thank you for Reva. Always liked her and josh. Nice u saved someone with as strong a personality as Olivia a little revenge and some connection to who she was before zombieness.
Ill stop babbling. Can't wait for next update. Thanks again for the fix. :)
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The end of the chapter, about Reva and how she knew the 'thing' in her arms as well as the form lagging behind her are somehow important was a different take. A good one. One that made me laugh as I realized WHAT she was eating. Lol. Great chapter! Always look forward to seeing an update. Thank you for writing and sharing this story!
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