I am very much liking how Natalia and Olivia are interacting now and am grateful for the chance to catch my breath after all those incredibly exciting cliffhangers. This has been a fun ride and I can't wait to see what happens next.
Hope the real life stress doesn't scare your muse off!
The image of the two of them curled up on the couch together so intimatly is great. It's a comfort that I didn't expect they'd be able to find in Afterworld but they have. Something that was so commonplace for lovers taken for granted to a great extent when you always need to be on edge fighting off the undead. The domesticity of it was wonderful and I really enjoyed their conversation as well as how Olivia insisted Natalia's hand remain above her heart, just to make sure it was beating. :-)
Great update, wonderful story! Thanks for sharing! I'll be around when you come back. I wish you the best in your move to get through the real life difficulties.
Not being an Otalia fan or zombie stories at all, I wasn't going to read this fic, but decided to give it a shot because I know you're a great writer and I was experiencing a dire dearth of good reading material.
I'm glad I decided to read it because it is simply awesome. I particularly enjoyed Olivia's zombie thoughts mixed in with her human thoughts - very well done and extremely disturbing!
Looking forward to more and I hope RL gives you a break.
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Hope the real life stress doesn't scare your muse off!
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Great update, wonderful story! Thanks for sharing! I'll be around when you come back. I wish you the best in your move to get through the real life difficulties.
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Not being an Otalia fan or zombie stories at all, I wasn't going to read this fic, but decided to give it a shot because I know you're a great writer and I was experiencing a dire dearth of good reading material.
I'm glad I decided to read it because it is simply awesome. I particularly enjoyed Olivia's zombie thoughts mixed in with her human thoughts - very well done and extremely disturbing!
Looking forward to more and I hope RL gives you a break.
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